I am writing new book so (PL on my blog) and here is knight from second book, Opan:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rate, CC, not suggestions

looks good

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the left arm is a little small

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and the hand is worse :XD:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

looks good though

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What the heck, is he wearing tights on his right leg? And..is that-..that a pirate leg?

lol, looks good (weird look to the legs and hands though : )

Im going to change right leg and make new right hand.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah, he is like Cloud, becouse I wanted to make Opan as great as Cloud is.

whisper *cloud's a moron*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the shoulder piece is too large and not sitting confortably

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

tiny left hand

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

body-form-destroying clothes

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

has he got tiny birds with massive beaks nesting in his hair?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the sword design doesnt look that great, have a look at real swords for inspiration.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

dont quite get whats happening with the legs... o0

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

works best when sword isnt imbeded in the air >_<

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

short legs and anatomy needs wiork (find good proportion and anatomy guides)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

needs improvment, but isnt too bad

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PJB21

The shoulder plate is meant to be large.... have you never played any Final Fantasy games? Well, almost everything is over-emphasised.

im aware its ment to be large, and yes i have seen FF characters etc. however, it looks awkward. the top of it should be touching his shoulder, not flying :XD:

pretty good

 

 

 

the proportion is a little off for arms hands and head

 

 

 

wheres his foot?

I will re-make his right hand and leg, left too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. I am playing now FF X, i was playing 1,2,3. Giong to end X,X-2,VIII