issy2 Posted February 10, 2007 Share Posted February 10, 2007 Edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 10, 2007 Share Posted February 10, 2007 Wow Issy! That has got to be your best poem yet. You are definatly developing as a poet. I loved it, you know, I think that verse train has bettered you and me. Writing wise. The last thing I posted in literature bites is my most recent thing (did it today) and I think its my best work. Lets keep going with the verse train, as its working wonders on us. Welldone Issy ~Andufus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 10, 2007 Share Posted February 10, 2007 Now all we need is to see some new work from LeeLee, I can bet the verse train has had the same effect on her. And made her better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 10, 2007 Share Posted February 10, 2007 Issy, I sugest you do what I did, make this your collective thread of all your work. It means there is less hyperlinks into sigs, and is easy to organise :mrgreen: but you don't have to if you don't want to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted February 10, 2007 Author Share Posted February 10, 2007 Issy, I sugest you do what I did, make this your collective thread of all your work. It means there is less hyperlinks into sigs, and is easy to organise :mrgreen: but you don't have to if you don't want to. Veeer possibly. But I do prefer have one thread for each... but then again that may be considered pretty spammy, so, yeah, I may do that ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 10, 2007 Share Posted February 10, 2007 coolio! I'll talk to you tommorow definatly. Got anymore poetry planned?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamyj2 Posted February 10, 2007 Share Posted February 10, 2007 :cry: that was freakin beautiful man... heres the best i got: up in the sky, flying high, sometimes, i wonder why. the birds and the trees, i let out a sigh up in the sky, flying high. PLAYER QUEST: The Spoils of War Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 10, 2007 Share Posted February 10, 2007 :cry: that was freakin beautiful man... heres the best i got: up in the sky, flying high, sometimes, i wonder why. the birds and the trees, i let out a sigh up in the sky, flying high. Capatilize your I's. Up in the sky, flying high, Sometimes, I wonder why. The birds and the trees, I let out a sigh Up in the sky, flying high. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
therealtermenator10 Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 OH my god (oops can we say that) that was one of the best poems I have ever read. It makes me miss my ex girl... Thats was so great Issy, keep writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeLee Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 My god issy these are fantastic,The regular effect your poems have on me. More comments when i have time, i just wanted to let you know how much i love 8-). I think that that love bug of your writing has bitten everyone who commented on the thread so far. great stuff farty pants :mrgreen:. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 My god issy these are fantastic,The regular effect your poems have on me. More comments when i have time, i just wanted to let you know how much i love 8-). I think that that love bug of your writing has bitten everyone who commented on the thread so far. great stuff farty pants :mrgreen:. LeeLee stop making me laugh! You know, Lee is really good at complimenting people, and making others laugh. Luv ya Lee. (As a friend, of course) and you Issy! Thanks for using the idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeLee Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 MWA HAHAHAHA :twisted: my evil complimentary powers have struck again. No, i'll be a good girl now O:) and be all horrible about your threads. Just joking, love you to ( as a friend). \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted February 12, 2007 Author Share Posted February 12, 2007 nvm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted February 13, 2007 Author Share Posted February 13, 2007 Added about 3 new ones, rate, hate, c/c please! : :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
warri0r45 Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 Cool poems Issy. :D Theres something so refreshing about reading poetry, I can't quite put my finger on it. :-k Again, well done! :D :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jim100200 Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 Wow, very good, I'm more of a story man myself but when I'm bored, II run verses over in my head making it last longer. Congratulations. ~Jim100200 A fine Gentleman, and lover of Pie, and of course the TET.I don't mind making siggys, just send me a "PM".Never forget someone always loves you, me! *Hug* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted February 13, 2007 Author Share Posted February 13, 2007 nvm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeLee Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ctp080188 Posted February 16, 2007 Share Posted February 16, 2007 I love "Hold Me Tight", I want to give that to my boyfriend! Lol. I also really really like the longer version of cold, I don't know what it is, I just love that the last verse contains that extra line that just sums the whole thing up in a rather blunt fashion. Lovin' it. :D SHH HUT YUH MUH. DERKHED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted February 16, 2007 Author Share Posted February 16, 2007 I love "Hold Me Tight", I want to give that to my boyfriend! Lol. I also really really like the longer version of cold, I don't know what it is, I just love that the last verse contains that extra line that just sums the whole thing up in a rather blunt fashion. Lovin' it. :D Thanks alot lol, ^^ If you're really serious about giving it to your boyfriend... :shock: I feel honoured lol. Go ahead :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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