February 15, 200719 yr Sorry if u cant see i just scaned this then. but please CC and give me pointers. (I actually drew it to enter in a contest on a site called Gaia Online, dont know if anyone plays, but add BaGEAtA if u do :P)
February 15, 200719 yr Check your anatomy a little, and the head, it's too large for a human, it will look like a child if it's too large. And the shoulders should be a little more defined. The hands look a little too small, and the knee looks like it has been broken. Google some anatomy ;)
February 15, 200719 yr I have NEVER seen a woman whose jugs were half of her chest... Your hair has no detail at all oh noes you used a line for the nose... Ears have no depth On the necklace\tats\ and starburst you fail to show that there is depth and roundness to the picture... A tat doesn' sit on one space on the skin the arm is round it goes AROUND the arm it circles it left foot is good... Right isn't You are aware that her head is like as big as 7\10's of her torso right? Crotch shot... Other then those things it looks supriseingly good... you have some major flaws that you should try and work out in your future drawings though New sigzor^^
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