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I was sort of wishing for something like a weapon, Maybe if we could keep the Ghost Buster 500 or something and shoot people with it. Those are the kind of holiday items I like. The rubber chicken was a great one I thought. Jagex, I felt really rushed the update and it wasn't very good although I liked the idea of going back to where we helped out last Christmas and catching the ghosts was great fun, I wished it would have been longer though. The outfits were better then last years, So i'll give Jagex that.

Will do :thumbsup: By the way. Im taking a break from runescape for about a week or so. Im going to be hang around with some friends and not going to be playing runescape. Its just a chance for me to get some fresh air and off the writers table. I'll try to write some each day but dont expect a lot of chapters rollin off the table this week. Sorry if you had your hopes up on seeing some chapters this week. I'll work extra hard on the chapters when I get back from my little "Break". Thanks again guys for the support. Peace out \

Hmmm.. I like it! :twisted: I find its a well put together story line. (A little offtopic but the story im working on uses my real name and my girlfriends name, So our stories have something in common. You use account names and I use names of people I know.) Anyway back on topic.. I really like the plot to this story and you said that it wouldn't be better then mine? I don't agree with you there. This story is well above the level of mine in my opinion. I really enjoyed reading this. Its full of action and humor and thats what I look for in stories. Keep up the good work and I will await the next chapter. :D

Woot! Chapter 3 and 4 are posted! I posted two chapters cause I thought I owed to you guys for missing a couple days of valuable writing time. I did take my time on both of them and thought them out as best as I could. I really hope you enjoy them and Gattree I look forward to seeing what you score me for these chapters. \ Alright, Well im going to get working on chapter 5 but until then.. Peace out :twisted:

Hey guys. Sorry I havent been posting any chapters or anything lately. I've been gone for a while so I havent had much time to write any. Im currently working on chapter 3 though. Thanks for being so patient guys. :)

You know you've been playing Runescape to long when go to sleep and yell to your mom "Im logging out!" You know you've been playing runescape to much when your standing in a loud crowd and say that your turning your public chat off and you then plug your ears.

Thank you willpk4cash. I really enjoy reading the feedback you guys give me because it helps me understand what it is like to be a writer. There is always room for improvment and I take into consideration everything people say on this topic. Even though this topic is just starting out I really feel that im getting better just from these few chapters I have writen. EDIT: The chapter two redo is up for you guys to read. It is a boring chapter because its meant to be a character bonding chapter. The next one will have more action in it. :D

Thanks for all the awesome feed-back guys. I'll redo chapter 2 since a few didnt like it. I'll try to take my time on it. As for chapter 3 I wont get into much with the brothers, Maybe I single fight scene and getting to the chest or something like that. Not much but I'll try my best. Thanks again guys :D

Posted chapter two for all of you to read. I really hope to get some replies from this one.

Hey guys, This is my first story i've posted on the forums so some creative feed-back would be nice. I've read a lot of good stories on the Forums and it has really inspired me to be a writer. If you want to you can leave me a character you would like to see appear in the story, Just leave his/her name and short description and I'll do my best to add him. I think this will become a full fledged story. People have been giving me advice and its really been helping me with my writing. PM me if you want to and feel free to give me a "HYT!" whenever you see me or talk to me. Happy Reading! :wink: ````````````````` Chapter One "I'd like to make a withdraw from my account please." I said quietly to the Banker as he went into the back to find what I asked for. "Here you are, Sir." He replied as he stacked a set of Black Dragon Hide on the counter along with a small red dagger and a Magic Short bow. I quickly put these items on and sheathed the dragon dagger on my side. I walked out of the bank, Slowly heading towards my destination of a the Ardroune Teleport House. As I walked two men caught my eye. It looked like they were talking and having a jolly old time. "Whats it like to live a normal life?" I thought. "Whats it like to be the one ask for help instead of answering the call of a damsel in distress?" "Maybe I'll find out one day." I muttered under my breath. "Maybe I'll find out one day... Realising I was at my set destination I fitted my Magic Short Bow with a runite arrow and stepped inside the house. The small glittering level instently caught my eye. "Here we go." I sighed as I pulled the level. Slowly but surly the familiar feeling of teleporting tingled through my body. I then felt my feet touch the heated ground of the small ruins surrounded by the small lava lake. The twining of bow strings and the blasts of magic along with armor and sword clashing against each other rang in my ears after the teleport feeling completely wore off. I quickly ducked behind a small wall to surrvey the scene. I could see the whole battle from my vantage point and was holding my bow firmly incase of emergency. The battle seemed to be between two clans. One looked to prefer mages as many were dressed in Mage Outfits and the other group looked as though they were fit to use Archery. Some were dressed in full armor sets also, Some in powerful Mystic Robes, Others in Black Dragon Hide like my own. Both teams weren't about to give up any ground, But being the idiot I am I decided to even the scores since I could count more mages then Rangers. I moved out from my safe haven and quickly pulled the string on my bow back. I looked for a target and found one, I scrawy little mage that was barly keeping up with all the excitment of a deep wilderness war. I readied my sights and was about to let go of the string, When a huge red paw crashed into the side of my head. I rolled back as far as the lever and rolled from the force of the blaw until I finally hit a small wall the stopped me. I glanced up to see the glowing red eyes of a huge Hellhound. The look in its eyes were cold and filled with evil. Corrupted with hatred and pain. I closed my eyes and the last thing I seen was a paw rise to the air ready to finish what it had started. But the hit did not come... I slowly opened my eyes to see a young women in black dragon hide warding off the the Hound with a barrage of rune arrows fired at the fastest speed I have ever seen. I was in so much pain but I kept myself from fainting long enough to see the Hound rear over and drop dead. I gave pity to the hound. It was doing no wrong, Simply looking for its dinner and found a careless fool caught with his mind where it shouldnt have been. The hound was only doing what it needed to survive. "Are you okay?" The young women said, As she made here way over to where I was laying. I couldn't answer because of the fact my back was in so much pain it was blinding. I then passed out.... ```````````````````````````````````` Chapter 2 Pain.. Thats all there was for me as I felt myself being dragged across the rough ground and felt the feeling of teleporting come over me once again, Only this time I had that to deal with and the fact that it felt like there was a dragon stomping on my back. When I hit the floor I hit harder then usual and braced myself against a table so I could get my balance. I then looked over the one who had saved me from a vicious hellhound not 5 minutes ago. "Looks like I better pay attention from now on." I thought as the stranger lowered her hood. Wow.. She was more beautiful then I could have ever imagined. Light green eyes that shone with the light entering the small house. Short brown curly hair that looked as though it was like silk. She looked like an angel." I thought as she started taking some of her equipment off and packing it in her pack. She walked quicly over to where I was standing and helped me into a chair. "Are you okay? You took a pretty bad beating before I came along." She said with the most beautiful voice I had ever heard. "Im fine.." I repied. "Thank you for saving me back there, I'd probly be a Hellhounds dinner if you hadn't shown up." "Oh! Where are my manners? Im Kia." She said in tone that almost sounded like she was excited. "My names Brad, Nice to meet you." "Same to you." She said and quickly went over to her pack and opened up the front pocket and pulled out some cooked lobsters. "Sorry that they arn't cracked open yet." "It's okay." I said as I turned in my chair and smashed two lobsters on the side of the table, Breaking their shells and handing one of them to Kia. "Umm.. How am I supposed to eat it? I usually eat with a fork." She said in a shocked voice almost as if she had never eaten something with her fingers before. "Well do I look like a have a fork with me at the moment?" I said as I cocked an eyebrow and gave a slight grin. Even that hurt and when I started to wonder why even talking and trying to grin hurt, I then remembered that I was just thrown around by a 4 ton dog like a chew toy. The more I thought about what happened the more the pain grew. Kia could tell by the expression on my face that I was in pain. "Hey! Are you feeling okay?" She said with a helpful tone of voice. "Yeah, I'll be fine.. Im just a little sore from being thrown around by that Hellhound." I replied to her question and decided I would go and visit the bank and maybe withdraw I few items. How mistaken was I? When I attempted to stand up it felt like the dragon stomping on my back started jumping and breathing fire onto the sore spot on my back.. Well I guess I can really said that it was a "Spot" on my back for the fact that my whole back felt like it was sharttered into a million pieces. "I think you need some rest" Kia said as she started to pull some runes out of her pocket. "You can stay at my house in Yanille until your back heals up a little, Use these and teleport to Yanille and meet me in the Watchtower and I'll help you get to the house portal." "Okay" I said as I took the runes from her hand. Next moment Kia was gone and I slowly began chanting and the feeling of teleporting feel upon me once again.... Chapter End. ```````````````````````````` Chapter 3 I felt myself hit harder then usual when I landed from the teleport and instantly I had arms holding me up... I then passed out from pain... Through the course of the next month or so I really got to know Kia well.. Maybe its just that I liked her company or maybe it was the fact that she wouldn't stop talking and I acually had something to do other then quests that could never fill the empty void in my thoughts. Slowly but surly I started to regain some of my abilitys I had before that Hellhound had its way with me, I regained the ability to stand up and even wield my old weapons. Running and jogging were still quite a challenge for me since my back felt a little uneasy even when I stood up. At first I felt a little uneasy about Kia always being with me and helping me so much and occasionaly not giving me the space I needed, But that feeling wore off as I started to trust her more and more and I started to feel like I had known her for ages. After a while I got to remember what happened when I teleported and passed out. I only remember a few things because I couldnt stay awake long enough for anything real interesting to happen. Kia filled me in with what happened when I was knocked out. I remembered all the mages helping me down the ladders of the watchtower. They owed me anyway because I had helped them recently with a quest they had for me. After getting me down to the watchtower, They acually dropped me on my head on the last ladder which knocked me out cold for a bit. Having a bad back and head at the same time dosen't mix well. Trust me. Kia filled me in that they got me to the bank before I started to wake a bit. I sort of remember seeing the shimmering lights of energy of the Magic Guild and after they carried me so far I finally seen the Purple Portal. Thats the only time I was so glad to see a house portal. Im not really a fan of construction and never have been. Too much heavy lifting, I mean whats more effortless then killing a moss gaint carrying a 2 ton club unarmed? Anyway back to what happened. After they had gotten me into Kia's house all the wizards said that had to go and tend to the watchtower again and make sure those pesky ogres didn't get their hands on those shield gems. I finally snapped out of my daze as Kia walked into the room and sat down beside the bed. "How are you feeling?" She asked. "IM feeling a little better, I still have my doubts on my back." I replied. "Can you get up and walk around? It might help your back." She said but something told me she wasnt going to take no for an answer. I slowy slipped sideways and on shaky legs I stood up and grabbed my sword belt and put it around my waist. "Do you really think your going to need that here?" She giggled as I attached my belt. "Can never be to safe." Walking through her house and out the front door I started streching. I found it helped before I started walking or jogging. It was painful yes but compared to what its like if you dont stretch, I would rather take some pain now rather then a lot later. I started my walk around the gardens and continued around the house. It was the most beautiful house anyone could ever build in my mind. Beautiful white marble stones where used for the walls, Everything in the house had a gold trim on it that you could see from a mile away. The gardens had the most exotic plants from different parts of the world and was filled wit the most wonderful of smells. I snapped out of my day dream when I seen Kia running up behind me. "Geez! You walk to fast!" She panted trying to catch her breath. "Maybe, Or are you just out of shape? You know ranging wont help you get very fit. You should start training a little bit with a sword." I said laughing to myself. "Oh very funny, As I matter of fact I can use a sword, I just don't like to." She said as she finally caught back up to me after catching her breath. "Anyway thats not that matter at hand." She said now changing the tone of her voice to very serious. "Before we got here I told you that I needed your help, I need you to meet me in Varrock in about five days." "Why five days? Can't you tell me whatever it is now?" I asked getting a little suspicious of what Kia was up too. "No, Im sorry. I need to talk things of with my superiors. I need to ask them questions on what "Our" next move is." "Superiors? What is this girl talking about?" I thought to myself. "Alright.. I guess." I said after a brief moment of silence. "Great! Now do you have anything to do until then?" She asked. "Well.. I suppose I could sleep, drink and be happy? Would that count?" I replied cocking my eye-brow and giving a slight grin. Kia gave me a look which im pretty sure meant "Stop screwing around or you can walk to Varrock." I get that look often. "Okay, Okay I'll look through my bank and I'll find something to do. Deal?" I asked. "Okay. Are you sure you back is healed enough for you to go?" She asked in a worried tone remember that I had quite a bad experience with that Hound a few days ago. "Yeah, I'll be fine. I can wield a sword and run so thats all I need." I said as I brought a grin onto my face again. "You grin too much." Kia said laughing and also smiling. Wow.. She had the most beautiful smile of anyone I had ever seen. "Whats wrong? Why are you looking at me funny." She said still smiling. "I'm not looking at you funny.. I just think you have a beautiful smile thats all." I said in a polite voice. "Thank you." She replied. "So? Are you ready to head to the bank?" She said as she checked her gear. "Ready as I'll ever be." I said as I walked with her towards that portal. Walking to the bank wasn't as hard as I thought it was going to be. Of course I had some back pains along the way but nothing to major. We both entered the back and Kia withdrew some quivler of rune arrows and her bow. I quickly searched through my back and while looking through something caught my eye. It was a small stack of Death runes and a few Bloods. My math was a little rusty but I could count atleast 250 death runes and 100 blood runes. Seeing those items along with a few prayer potions and Lobsters in the back. I realised what I was going to do for those few days I had before I met Kia again. I was going to pay a visit to the legendary Barrows Brothers. I had never been there and thought it would be a good excuse to test if I was ready for true combat again. "I think I know what im going to be doing Kia." I said in an excited tone. "What would that be?" She asked looking puzzled. "Im going to set and expedition to Barrows, Besides I might get lucky and i'll be able to pay you back for saving me from that hound." I said. "What? You dont have to pay me for saving you. You have already paid your dues with me." She said smiling again. "How did I?" I asked. Now I was the one with the puzzled look on my face. "You have accepted me for who I am, and not being a stuck up fool and saying you could have saved yourself or something like that." She said in a light tone, Almost as if she was embarresed for saying what she had just said. "Kia.. I never really got to say this but.. Thank you for everything. Your the only person who had really looked out for me and helped when I was hurt, I consider you a closer friend then anyone I have ever known." I replied. "Well I guess I better be off, I have quite a hike to get to Barrows from here." "Here, Take these. It might make your trip a little shorter." She said as she handed me some runes for a teleport to Varrock. "Thank you." I said. Thinking about Varrock I felt a slight tingle come over me as I closed my eyes. When I opened them again I was standing in the bustling Varrock Center. "Well, I guess this is good-bye for now." I heard Kia say in a loud voice because of the crowd. " I'll see you in a few days." I replied to her as she disappered through the crowd. "Uh-oh!" I thought. "I forgot to ask her where we were going to meet, How come this always happened to me?" I made a fist with my hand in anger and felt something crush in my hand. Opening my hand I seen a small piece of paper. On it was a note from Kia telling me where to meet her. "Girls got style, Thats for sure" I thought as I walked east towards Mort'ton swamps... Chapter End `````````````````````` Chapter 4 I stepped inside Dharok The Wretcheds tomb and slowly made my way to the center of the of the room. There the mighty tomb keeping the mighty Dharok at bay. Dealing with the other brothers was easy. It was Dharok that I was worried about. The craky skulls and musty smell of dead humand lingered in his tomb while the other tombs were quite clean for having been underground for 2000 years. I slowly started to push open his tomb knowing what will happen next. I then heard the familier booming voice saying " You dare steal from us!" Suddenly the angry and restless spirit of Dharok apperared on the other side of the room. "You are a fool to come here, Mortal. You have no bussiness here!." He taunted. Making a mad dash at me he swung his mighty axe. Rolling out of the way I quickly shot a quick Blast of Fire at him. It seemed to do affect him somewhat because he staggered at the power of the Blast. "Some thing tells me this will be a good fight! I've been waiting years for a fight like this! Lets us continue and may the best warrior win!" He said in a deep tone. I simply replied from under my hood. "So be it." Quick as a flash he ran over to where I was standing and Smashed his axe as hard as he could where I was standing. I quickly slid out of the way and made my way around his casket and blasting him with a huge ball of fires. He staggered again and again after each blast had hit his armor. "Maybe Im finally breaking through that think armor of his" I thought. "My back wont be able to take much more of this sliding and doging though." I was almost in a day dream when I realised my oppenent had advanced on where I was standing! Without having time to move I was struck directly in the chest with the Huge axe, Throwing me against the wall. Walking over to me Dharok taunted " Look who is winning out little fight now!" As I slowly picked myself up off the ground I tryed to catch my breath, Dharok was still in his own little world taunting at how he had won this fight and not paying attention to me. It was then that I started praying to Saradomin for two things to help me send this evil spirit to where he belonged and to let me hear Kia's voice again. I then felt a rush of energy flowing through my body I realised that I could turn this fight around I readied myself for an attack. I began chanting and summoning the powers of a mighty Wind Wave and sending the Wave straight into Dharoks Chest. He collapsed from the force of the Wave and he then disappered. I heard his voice booming through the Tomb. "You have fought well warrior, And I will let you pass. May luck be on your side." And I felt the presence of his spirit leave the tomb. I then pushed open his coffin to reveal a passage way into the tunnels below the Tombs of the Brothers. As I walked through the tunnels I found a door that would lead me to the center of this maze. I solved a lock on the side of the door and walked in seeing the mighty chest in the center room. I walked slowly to the chest and checked around to make sure I was not going to be interupted. I opened the chest and I heard the familar sqeak of the ricky hinges that held the chest together. I looked in with doubt but as I moved what looked to be an average pile of loot from barrows I noticed two things at the bottom of the chest. Laying closely to each other was a Dharoks Great Axe and Platebody. as I picked them up and slowly put them in my pack I felt the Spirits of both Guthan and Dharok as if they we're standing next to me. I swung around ready to fight these spirits but saw nothing. I then heard a faint whispering in my ear. "You did well. May these items give you the strength to carry on with your adventures. Treat them well." I then felt the spirts lighten after a ray of light appered close by. I then pulled some runes out of my pack and the framilar feeling of moving from one spot to the other by teleportation hit me and the next moment I was in Seers Village standing outside of the huge Camelot Castle. Still a little hurt from Dharok and that Hound a few days ago I slowly made my way into the bank and stored the precious items. "Now.. To find Kia and see what see wanted." I thought as I read the small messy note she handed me before I teleported to Varrock. Written on the note was: "After your done with your little trip at Barrows meet me at the duel arena. I'll be waiting on the top of the arena watching a few fights." See you soon. Kia I then set off for the duel arena... Chapter End ```````````````````````````

Hey guys.. Look im really sorry to spam but I need some help. I just recently got back from a trip and I missed the event I wanted to go to. Dagganoth Kings. I was wondering if anyone could give me some advice on going. Im training everything I need to survive down there including Range, Mage and my combat stats. Im quite sure of what to do and what happens if a King gets outta line but Im still quite nervous about going with a group. If anyone could PM In-game and take some time to show me what to do it would really help me out a lot. The only reason I posted in this topic is because you guys are like the masters at slaying them so I thought you could give the best advice :wink: Again im really sorry for spamming.. But I really want to be able to do this event. Thank you. :)

Franky I've done that before only my it was on my bed. My bed is up on wheels for easy movment and I caught my toe on one of the wheels.. Thats not the broken bone to this story either. :P The broken bone follows after I stub my toe and fall flat on my face to end up breaking my cheek bone #-o Wow talking about all this really makes me look back and think.. "What the hell was I thinking?" Lol

My sisters Boyfriend drives a Kawasaki Ninja ZZ 600R and totaled it. He was going through an intersectiona nd a car pulled out in front of him. He hit the car going about 70 Mph. He took the whole back right tire off the car and his helmet broke back window of the car he hit. He broke his wrist and was really sore from where his lower body hit the bottom of the tank. The women who owned the car also had no insurence on her car so that wasn't good. I have picture of the Bike I think.. Let me see if I can find them. Edit: I guess I dont :( I'll have to get him to send the pictures of his bike after the wreck to me and I'll try to post them

That sound horibble, Im glad your ok :) Geez.. Im bad on a bike.. I wonder what im going to be like in a car :ohnoes:

Ouch.. That would hurt :o I've also broken my wrist racing my best friend across a gym. I was running so fast that when I stopped up against the wall I broke my wrist. Having a broken wrist is not fun to anyone who has never had one.. Believe me it isn't that best way to start off a school year :oops:

Alright.. This is going to sound really stupid but this just happened to me so this is why I am posting this Topic. I got up from watching T.V and decided that I was hungry. I walk out to the Kitchen and open up the cupboards and look for something to snack on. It seems there was nothing really good in there but then my eye catches the last can of vegtable soup. It looked lonely so I decided to end it misery by eating that poor last can of soup.. Well little did I know that im not very good at holding on to something and well as I was getting the can opener out.. I dropped the can of soup on my pinky toe. I just got back from the docters and it's broken :wall: Post some of the ways you've broken a bone and thought it was funny how it happened. By the way this wasen't A normal sized can of soup. It was a fairly big can and dam did it ever hurt. :cry:

Yea. Most people have a different opinion on what is considered "Older Metal"

I asked what your favorites were and I simply posted mine.. I dont have too like all older bands, I jsut posted the ones I enjoy listening too.. Please read my post before you reply next time :roll: Also I listed quite a few older bands.. Metallica, Motorhead, Black Sabbath, Motley Crue, Pantera, Twisted Sister, And Quiet Riot..

I know im not the only one who currently listens to some of the older bands of the 80's - 90's. Im just wondering what your favorites from them are? I personaly like quite a few older Metal Bands. Motorhead, Twisted Sister, Metallica, ( They aren't really and old band but they are still awesome. ) Quiet Riot, Black Sabbath. And of course my two personal favorites of all time.. Motley Crue, And Pantera I'm not sure about everyone else but I really like older Metal music just because it gives that really stand up to the world feeling when you listen too it. Post your thoughts on what you think of Metal music from the 80's and 90's. Thank you :) Also Sorry if something like this has already been posted. :shock:

Not that I know of. Sorry to spam but I didn't even know you could exchange them for sharks? Where can someone do that?

Well thank you everyone for posting help and I really give a huge thanks to those who voiced their opinions. I'll set a goal of doing runecrafting. I might post it if I feel like I get bored after a while. Again another thank you to everyone who gave their idea's. I think this can be closed.

Thank you to everyone who has posted ideas for helping me. Anyone else have any ideas?

I kill Fire giants and Black demons for a living in runescape -.- I think I can skip out on the hill giant idea but thank you for posting your ideas :)

Im trying to stick with my currently high stats but I could do that.. It might take a while but it sounds well worth it.

Tried that.. Any Levels I should get too? I know I have to get to 75 woodcutting and thats what im currently working on.