not that bad for a second. Nice use of colours and good idea :) if you want a rating 8/10 if I was rating for it being your second. If i was just rating it 6/10 cos of some weird linework
I've fished 4000 sharks in just over a week just to get a whip... But I was never as fast as you were. Well done so far just try and keep the will to finish it off.