No offense, but you are horrible at making songs (so far anyways). To make good lyrics, they have to atleast make a little sense. Sure you can rhyme stuff but if it doesn't make sense it won't work. Lemme give you an example. Lets say I made a song and I call it "Frog in my Pants". If I were you, here is what the first 2 lines would be like: The frog is hoppin' in my pants I like chocolate ice cream with black ants Yeah, that's what your songs sound like ^^. They rhyme, but they don't make sense or go together. What are you talking about? That makes perfect sense. There's a frog in your pants and you like chocolate ice cream with black ants in it. What's not to get? Nice rhyme, by the way.