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Pretty good. You wright like me, with every other paragraph you geyt better and have less mistakes. Congrats, 7/10 8)

Zeon, mangus, quizara.... The names were stuck in Van's head as he and tweak killed some ice-giants for easy exp. "So, ya think that we can trust that''ohhiya'' guy?" said tweak as he sent a firewave at an ice-giant's face. "Not sure but his name wasent in the book, but zeon's was. I think the names were of our enemys." Van said, as he used his new "virus sword" to slay the giant. But the giant dident die. A blue glow surrounded it this time. Van swung with his old scimmy, but that dident work. He used his virus sword, but that barely worked. Andrew from jejex had been watching them, and pmed van and said: Use the book!! Its my games only hope!!! Van did what andrew said and an ORANGE glow surrounded him. His beutiful black shirt now had 4 orange symbles engraved in it. He swung with his "virus sword" at the monster, and the blue glow dissipeared and it became another normal ice-giant. He and Tweak killed it quickly, and talked with andrew. Van pmed the group and filled them in. they all gathered in varroc palace to talk. " I like your performance, just dont let the virus spread too mutch, I cant crack the code yet so your gonna have to do it the old fasion way." Said andrew to Van,tweak, Mimi, Rose and Sieg. "we will kill it easely." sAID Van. "hope so" said andrew, and he logged out.

Thanks for the compliment...atleast I think it was a compliment.8) anyway... Everybody sighed as Zeon's body dissipeared. In his place was zeon's "virus sword" he was using and a a mysterious book called " dawn of twilight". Van picked up the sword and book. There was an option to weild / Read book. "That was tough." said Rose. "and exhausting" added sieg. "Look, Zeon dropped a book called "dawn of twilight"..... should i read it?" said van, unsure."Sure van, why not?" said Mimi, smiling. Van read part of the book aloud so the group could hear it. " Zeon, mangus, quizara.... They will rule the land and take it from jejex hands, if not stopped by the one with the 'virus sword', and friends with hearts pure. The key to defeat is that the one with the virus sword must........" "MUST WHAT?" the group said, waiting to see what van would say next. "The pages after are ripped out..." said Van, frowning. "now we have to find the pages...." said Rose. "Not an easy task." said Sieg, putting away his magic bow and picking up his arrows. Just then, a figure pure black appeared up on the alter. "I will help you, only when you are in desperate need." The name that appeared on the screen was: OHHIYA

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Zeon charged van, his "virus sword" flailing every direction. Van took a step back and starting attacking on the offensive. Zeon dodged every attack with great ease. Zeon thrust his sword strait down twords van's head but van blocked. Vans rune scimmy shattered instantainiously, But it pulled back togeather and van continued fighting. "You are very skilled....for a n00b." Just then Sieg sent a flurry of rune arrows at Zeon, only 5 hit their target. Rose and mimi swung their r2hs into Zeons lower back. Zeon collapsed, but a green glow surrounded him and he kept on fighting, now at lv 200. Van pmed every one and they formed a plan. Sieg shot 10 arrows, only bronze. Just as Zeon blocked, mimi slammed her r2h into Zeon's kidnee. Zeon stumbled back and tripped over the step up to the alter. Tweak was begind him and used an earth wave. It sent a huge wall of earth into Zeon's face. Zeon flew back and his body hit the wall with a thud. Rose swung her r2h, slowly at Zeons face but he ducked, exactly what Van wanted him to do. Vans knee introduced itsself to Zeon's face and he went flying upward. Van jumped up, slashed zeon up so fast even jejex couldent see it. Zeon's lifeless body fell through the empty air and hit the cold, hard stone floor with a bone-crushing thud.

At least i know that some people read my righting from an empty head... oh well back to the story.PS: Im not the oldest nor best wrighter. The group climbed up the latter, almost crushing it with the weight of their rune wepons and armer. They continued down the hill when Sieg fell into somthing. The whole group looked down and saw a discolored patch of runescape grass. The group all walked into it and they fell into a lair, Zeon's lair. Van survayed the sight. A hacker did a good job at making the cave, but tiny imperfections lay everywhere. The group continued down to find a sort of church, where someone sat playing the pipe organ, with great skill. The man turned around with a crazed look on his face. He grabbed his rune battle axe and swung blindly, sending part of the organist's bench flying into the face of tweak. he used a fire strike and burnt up the bench before it hit his face. With one swing, Rose killed the madman. "Very good, but that is only my minion." said a deep voice from the church door. "Zeon....we end this now!!!" said Van, his rune scimmy glowing red at the sight of the virus. The group charged at zeon, with Tweak sending fire waves and Sieg sending rune arrows into the face of Zeon by the use of a magic longbow. Rose swung her r2h at zeon but he dodged. Just as he dodged, tweak binded him and Sieg sent a flurry of arrows into Zeon's face. Zeon ducked, but his jaw met with Vans knee and his back got introdeced to Roses r2h. Zeon squeeled with pain and backflipped onto the church alter. He created a Sword out of the virus. The words zeon said made everyone very unhappy...... "I'm not playing anymore..."

Sieg and Rose looked extreemly puzzled. "Do you know that mage?" said Mimi, sounding confused. "yep. We used to train together. He shot spell whilst I attacked." said van, smiling. "Those were the good 'ol days. 100gp ment you were ritch." tweak added. Everyone laughed. Another tremor stopped the laughter. "Lets go before this spreads more." sieg said sternly. The cave leading to crandor wasn't what you would call enjoyable. The ceiling dripped liquid,skeletons of the dead wondered the early part of the cave, while red spiders crawled over the moldy and rocky cave floor. The group came up to the "odd wall". "Who was thgat hooded figure?" asked rose. "Zeon, a well known hacker in the underworld." Said tweak. Tweak put binding spells on the lesser demons and continued through the cave, untill they reached the ladder that would lead them to their biggest fear. "Will we make it?" Mimi said nervously. "we're counting on it." said van. "I hope." said tweak as they continued up the ladder to find.....

ok, im back. ps: I dont have the time to copy from word to this. :mrgreen: Van and his gang board the old, creaking wooden ship and sailed to karajima island. The boat stops, the old ropes are tied to the dock The adventurers step out onto the dock and walk silently to the fishing platform. Sieg supplys the group swordfish. Whilst walking to the volcano rim, van stops so suddenly that Rose bumps right into him. The group looks at van and notice he is staring upward. They all look up to see a man wearing darkwizard robes and a hood. He was surrounded by a greenish glow. He takes out a red staff with a pitch black orb on the top and points it at sieg. Sieg rises into the air, and forced into a position that looks like jesus was on the cross. " stop!!!!" screemed Rose as the man charges up the blast. Then suddenly, A mage steps out from the volcano rim and screems- "FIRE WAVE!!!!!!! A huge wave of fire is shot right at the man with the staff. He gets forced backward, and sieg drops to the ground, landing on his knee, startled. The man with the staff grunts, and teliports away. "Who are you?!" screemed van. " Its tweak! " van just smiles and walks over to greet him. Just as he gets over to tweak, a tremmor shakes the ground. "It's spreading... " said sieg, tumbling over a rock " Lets go." said Van and Tweak sounding like they were brothers.

Van checked back on the forums, and to his surprise, he saw a title that said: undefeatablel glowing monster " Bingo!" said van as he opened the link. I have been killing monsters and some when they die, they become undefeatable and have a green glow around them. Contact Mimi for info. Van logged onto runescape and contacted mimi. She had long, blue hair, addy plate, skirt and a rune 2 handed sword. "hi. I'm van. you said you had information on the infected monsters?" " Ya i got info. want to hear it? " said mimi, almost toying with Van. " Yes. BTW, I can defeat them. I need to rid runescape of them. " "Oh..." said Mimi. " The virus opened a hole on the surface of crandor in the hillside. It has tons of infected monsters... players go in but they never come out." " whats the highest lv monster in there?" said Van, frowning " I dont know, but i bet its a possesed monster." Said mimi. Just then, Sieg and rose came running up. " There is a hole on crandor full of the infected monst..." " I know." van said, cutting Sieg off. "Mimi told me. So who's coming to help me ? "All of us" said Sieg, Rose, and their new friend mimi. :mrgreen:

post deleted " huh? " said van as he checked if anyone replyed to his post on the forums. Van loged in and there waiting for him was Rose. " me and Sieg are going to meet at the top floor of the staff shop in varroc. You can get your FIXED scimmy, but....." Said rose. Van seemed puzzled. "but what?!" "It still has the green glow... nobody has tried to wield it yet..." "Well ill be the first..." said van. As van and rose walked to the staff shop, van said " why do you and Sieg hang out so mutch? " Rose looked at van, blushed , and said in a stern voice- "We are only accomplices. nothing more. " Van smiled and they continued to the staff shop. " Van, what took ya? I've had this fixed for 5 hours already!!... but its still glowing green, it might be infected with the virus.." "So? I dont care." said Van. "Lets go test it out on darkwizards." said Rose. Van wielded the scimmy and hacked up a darkwiz. But it got up again and started glowing green. At exactly that moment, The scimmy started glowing red. Rose and Sieg screemed-" Attack it!!!" Van swung at the darkwiz and the darkwizard fell, the green glow dissapearing a second later. " You must be responsible with this new power, and help save runescape." said Sieg. " I WILL" said van.

Thanks for the compliment but this is an ongoing story so ill be addin to it any time i feel like it. :mrgreen:

Van went onto the runescape forums and typed... - I got attacked by a river troll with a green glow around it. it broke my rune scimmy and i could'nt even hit a 1. I missed the whole time! that never happens! Please i need information on how to stop it, where it will be next, and how to fix my scimmy! thx, VAN.- He logged back on to runescape and noticed little 1's and 0's floating in the sky, in little groups. static blured parts of the screen. A group of players were talking in varroc cloths shop. Van joined their conversation. Sieg: this virus is ruining runescape! Rose: We need to stop it, but how? Van: I encountered it. It infected a river troll, and broke my rune scimmy. Sieg and rose: IT BROKE YOUR RUNE SCIMMY?! Van: yes, and i need it fixed. Sieg: Let me see it, there have been reports but i never saw one. Van: ok. I made a post in the forums. Rose: WHAT? NOW EVERYONE WILL KNOW!!! Van: sorry. Sieg: add us to your friends list, we need to get information. Van: ok, np. SIEG is added to your friends list. ROSE is added to your friends list. Sieg: we gotta go. later van. Rose: see ya....soon.... With a slight grin on his face, van loged out.

Van PMed his friends, and got no information on the virus. Whilst walking through the backstreets of varroc, he came across a man wearing darkwizard clothes, a hood, and shooting the green glow, the same as the river troll was surrounded by. "hey! " screemed Van as he ran up to the strange man. "What is that? who are you?" van said. The man replyed... "YOU have seen too mutch... you will be killed. " he charged yhe blast in his hands and said- " for the record, call me zeon." " OK thanks, " said van. The man frowned at his ignorance and fired. It came closer and closer, and at the last moment... Van teliported just as the wave of energy destroyed a house and killed a mugger. Van needed more information. He needed connections...

OK, my first story, so ill try to make it worth your reading. thanks! and if yoy wanna be in the story, just say so. Van was an adverage runescape player, around lv 60. He was fishing on karajima, catching lobbies for some lesser and skeleton kills on crandor. Again he was attacked by a river troll, but after he killed it, it started glowing a neon green, and its hp was back at full. Van tried everything, but he couldent even hit a 1. The fishers around him started screeming, "ITS IMPOSSIBLE!!!!" "WHAT THE HECK IS HAPPINING?!" And the one screem that cought van's attention... "ITS A VIRUS!!! RUN!! YOU WILL BE KILLED!!" Van blocked again with his rune scimmy, and it shattered. There was a green glow around his broken sword. With quick reflexes, he jumped on the monster, used it as a spring bored, and jumped into the air. Pulling out his magic staff, he teli-grabbed his lobbies and broken rune scimmy and teliported into varroc. Maby he could get information off the players there, or from the varroc library.

Oh please! I personaly am not allowed to get members until school's out.. so it wouldent be fair to us hard working citizens of runescape that still play f2p. Plus, what id a member with 99 in a skill quit members? :mrgreen: