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  1. Mate What Are You On About? Regards, Srdofjustice
  2. Chapter 7 I had terrible dreams that night; all I could think of was my family screaming and groaning under the lash of an executer, once my family had been killed from the pain the man pulled off his mask: My lord it was me! I woke up in a cold sweat as all the other men began to wake themselves and prepare for one of the most dangerous skirmishes we may experience, those rangers had deadly accuracy and were lightning fast so it was nigh impossible to take the time to get a shot. We approached the flimsy, wooden gates of the guild and saw the guards at the entrance quake with fear then run. Some of the others had brought torches with which the gate was burned down, as we filed into the area that we hoped would spell the end of the Ranger's Guild, all of the members were just standing there with their bows, arrows and crossbows thrown to the ground. It was as if they wanted to surrender! Until Robin Hood cried from the top of a battlement "Now!" We must not have seen him, we paniced as all the Rangers picked up their weapons and began to fire. Chapter 8 That first battle with the Rangers was a cautionary tale, we lost 50 men while they lost one simply due to his own clumsiness. They expelled us from their gates and laughed as we got up to lick our wounds. He was not pleased "What?! You could not kill a bunch of useless rangers?" "Sorry sir but they were to quick for us, they are a better fighting for-aaaarghhhh." The man that spoke up about the rangers was killed by him. "Now what we are going to do is train our own Ranging skills so that next time we attack we can win." "But what will we train on?" "Well there is an abundance of disgusting Dwarves and Goblins just past the Fishing Guild we could help one side if we wanted too." "Ok let's go men!" The next week all we did was train our Range non-stop, we all began to improve our acuracy as well as the distance of which we could hit the Goblins. I was told that we were to finish for the day, collect any fallen arrows and rest up for the big confrontation with the Rangers, who had rebuilt their walls and gate which were now made of hardest steel, to defend easier.
  3. Sorry Can't Be Stuffed Writing Today I Might Do Some More In The Night Regards, Srdofjustice
  4. To any people that are enjoying the story so far I'm trying for 4 posts a day 2 in the mor 2 in the afternoon but this may change due to school so keep readin and I hope you enjoy Coramon's next adventures. Regards, Srdofjustice
  5. Hi I've noticed that although there are many avid story writers and readers on the site there is no official tip it team to read these and rate them in their genre I was thinkig maybe we could set one up and maybe have writing comps, please reply with ur opinion and if possible I'd like to be in it if it is set up. Also another question how do u get on the tip it staff?
  6. Chapter 5 "Aaaah I see you have been promoted my good friend." Salacin Exclaimed as I approached him. "Yes I have, no thanks to you. I thought it was a fake attack!" I expressed to him with much arm emotion, none of which pleasant. "It needed to be realistic so shut up buddy you are still alive, you've been promoted and I've lost half my bloody men!" "Oh so now I have to apologise for killing people that attacked me!" "Ah let's not fight, now tell me what happened after our little scuffle?" "Well I needed tending to due to a wound I recieved from someone. Then he spoke to us and called me to his personal chamber." "Then what happened?" "I was heavily promoted to his elite guard and given this beautiful new armour." "Be careful with how you appraise that armour, it was us that gave you the opportunity to recieve it. Apart from that what is your new mission?" "Well I am to stay close to him and make sure he does not die." "A fair enough mission haha!" "Well?" "Well what?" "Well what is my new mission?" "Ah yes Your new mission is to get closer to him so that he trusts you so deeply you can ask any question and recieve a completly honest answer. Then of course kill him." "Ah ok so can I go home and sleep now?" "Yes have pleasant dreams." I left the sewers somewhat annoyed because of the reaction I got from Salacin, but anywho I was deep in thought as to what I would be doing tomorrow in his service. After about 5 minutes of walking I was approached by another of the elite guard, he said this to me. "[garden tool] what are you doing here? We are stationed at the tower constantly so get back to your post!" "Oh I am sorry good sir have a pleasant evening." "That'll be hard when I'm in a stupid place filled with stupid druids." "Ah well try." I walked to the tower wondering how my chambers would be; comfortable or humble? When I arrived I was greeted by the new entrance guard with a "Greetings Sir! Your chambers are through here!" When he said this he opened a hidden side door with stairs leading up that I had not noticed before. I walked up the stairs and came into a beautiful area that looked wonderfully comfortable, I could see this was where the elite guards slept. As I took of my armour another guard walked up to me and said "I wouldn't be doing that if I were you we could get called to battle in the middle of the night so just sleep with it on." I took the man's advice and settled in for what I hoped was going to be a pleasant dream. Chapter 6 I slept unnaturally well that night. When I woke it was to the sound of men yelling at me to get off my arse and get ready for my guard shift. We arrived in unison to his chamber and moved into position. I noticed that the guards had tripled. "Alright today we are going to survey Burthorpe and see if it has any use to us, after that we will take the Dwarves tunnel under White Wolf Mountain and the top of it aswell. I hope you all have helped the Dwarves with their fishing contest?" He announced quite charismatically "But sir what happened to the attack on Falador?" I asked "I figured it was futile and who needs Falador anyway? So we are attacking Camelot instead." "Ok lets go!" We marched on to White Wolf Mountain, I was chosen to lead the attack from under the Mountain due to the fact that all the low level guards would kill the Wolves because they were expendable. The start of the campaign went off as a success but it was the second phase that stopped us, the knights and seers had rallied many people to fight back against us but we were to much for them, I myself was caught in battle with Sir Lancelot. We feigned and parried long into the night until he went for an actual attack, he hit me square on the shield so I stabbed back all the while hiding behind me shield to avoid being stabbed in the head, I felt some resistance but I pushed the sword deep and felt it go through armour into soft tissue. I looked over my shield and found that with that one stab I had killed Lancelot and so demoralised the rest of his troops. The ones that survived that early battle surrended and joined us. We set up camp that night and I knew I wouldn't be able to report back to the resistance which was a load off my chest! It was announced that if we could travel unnoticed we were to attack the rangers guild on the morrow then to Ardougne where our biggest battle yet was to commence.
  7. Chapter 3 I entered that shiny, guthixforsaken placehe calls a tower and shivered as I saw statues of pure Runite in his image. "What are you doin' 'ere scum?" A guard said crassly to me. "I'm here to join his personal guard." I replied very matter of factly. "Oh I'm sure, Let's see ya papers!" "Here you go." I handed him the papers which he took quite quickly and harshly. "Thats all in order go through to the recruitment desk. Oh and by the way you'll get to start out as a bodyguard Ha! First in the line of defence for him." "Lovely, have you ever brushed your teeth?" I queried just to make a personal attack on him. Obviously I rushed out of the door to avoid any serious punishment. I made it safely through the doors and went up to the recruitment desk, handed in my papers and collected my new uniform; a full Iron armour set the standard issue for my rank, as I would get promoted the armour would become better and more impressive : The elite guards receiving some full 3rd age armour(Which would've come at a great price to him) When I got into that heavy armour I was to report to the bodyguard's station of my level, which is about 10 metres away from him. I knew that as soon as I got to my post the other members of my group would attack and I would be the one to defend them. So I took my hazardous post. All of a sudden there was a sound of a small battle in the entrance, then it moved closer up to the point of the Anteroom which contained the recruitment desk. There was a scream and then the sound of the guard I insulted crying "You shall never enter this room and attack for as long as I shall live!" To no person's surprise the doors blasted open and they rushed in, clad in bronze armour so as to not give away their identity. I gripped my Iron Halberd in terror as they ran towards us, this would not be an easy battle although it was a set up I would be fighting for not only his gratification but for my own life aswell. Chapter 4 We started to battle, luckily for me my halberd was more than enough to subdue the enemy and keep them away from me to avoid close-combat of which I would need to switch weapons. Surprisingly I found enjoyment in cutting down those that were on my side as if this was my duty and I would lay down my life to protect that which was my charge. After about 10 long minutes of battle one of the "enemy" got through under the defence of my halberd and came in with a swift jab of a bronze dagger, I would not accept this so I threw down my halberd and drew out my battleaxe. This small melee was enough to drain my energy but before he could go in for the fatal blow I was able to lift up my battleaxe and and end his life quite painfully I hope. In the medical area after the battle the wounded were tended to (I was included) as my wounds were cleaned and covered he came into the room and started to address us. "You all fought well and with great vigour I salute you, all new recruits are promoted to the next stage, collect your steel armour and go back to my chamber in preparation, they may attack again. As for Coramon come to my personal chambers I need to speak to you." I thought "Oh no!" He must know about my treachery, well I shall deny everything and keep a safe distance from him at all times. I entered the chamber and much to my surprise; he was lounging! Obviously I wasn't suspected of treachery. "Sit boy, sit." He said to me. "Ok sir." "I noticed your prowess on the battlefield and wish to thank you personally." "Thankyou sir although I was just doing my duty." "Ah no it was more than that, much more. And that is why I am giving you a special promotion and a secret mission." "Wow, I mean yes sir thanks sir. What does the promotion entail and mission obviously I am curious about that." "First of all, the promotion is a straight way to my personal guard so you can collect your 3rd age armour after this." "Sir I'm astonished!" "Shush, boy do not interrupt me, and as for the mission it is to infiltrate the resistance and consult my spies there, I need as much information on them as I can." "O-ok sir." "Yes I know what you're thinking: No he must know that I am a member and my mission with them was to get in close with me, find my weakness and then destroy me." "Yes sir, I assume you will take your vengeance now?" "I will do no such thing, I can use you as a double agent, and I shall. Pick up your armour, put it on then go to them and say you have managed to get into my personal circle, of course you have. Then make them think you are still with them and we shall act as one. Myself at the front showing them that I have no idea of your treachery, and you in both parties acting on my orders to destroy those insignificant swines." "Yes sir I will enjoy it to the upmost." "Oh and as you walk out, contemplate the fact I have just spared your life, if I did not find you useful you would be dead right now, and as long as you follow my orders and stay on my side you shall stay alive." "Yes sir, goodbye sir." As I left his chambers, collected my new armour and left the tower, I realised something. I wanted to be on his side and go against the traitors! So I walked to that dank manhole and enetered all the while knowing that it would be me that destroys the resistance and becomes a partner with him, earning me glory and riches so that my name would be remembered forever. This is the path I chose to take, and it would affect my life to the core changing my view on the world forever.
  8. Ah thanks guys and yeah I know that most people base their stories in Falador but I wasn't sure about where I could put it so that people could recognise where things were happening and thanks hawkx bout the reply but I make sure to not have spelling errors and if I do I'll fix them as soon as possible I should add some more chapters soon
  9. Ok This is my first story (apart from school stuff) so I'll try to make it as good as possible. If you do take the time to read it please comment it'd be great to see what you think and see your crtisism/comments Also if you so wish I'm quite open to character suggestions so make yours known..... Here goes Prologue "I've known imprisonment my whole life, ever since he came all we've known is the iron fist and the bloody lash of our new master. All we know is to follow the instructions of the man who has come to cause us fear even from thinking of him. when he first came we thought he would help our city, not bring about it's destruction. Now he has his sight on the city of Falador, he craves the power of the White Knights. So we are marched in our thousands to bring upon the destruction of another person's home or kill their family. this is not what we want!" "My name is Coramon I was fifteen when we became slaves to him I am now 18, so I am eligible for recruitment into his 'guard' all they do is march into that bloody, dirty, body-strewn area that we die upon our hundreds in before the merciless archers who think we want to take over Falador. Those of us that survive these first massacres are heavily wounded or hid beneath the carcus of a fallen comrade. Even though they came back to fight another day his generals kill them as if they were trators to the 'cause'. The only time I ever saw mercy was when a friend of his ran down to help him. After this show of apparent weakness they were both tortured and executed in the city square, all citizens had to come and see the punishment. There were small children in the crowd! After these ordeals we have learned to harden our hearts to the sufferig of others only thinking inwards and trying not to make him notice us. "Please for Guthix's sake save us from the torment we recieve from him; our supposed 'Father' he calls himself hmph as if he was fatherly. Hear our torment and know that this is the story of 'The Druids' Chapter 1 As I walked as inconspiculously as I could throught our barren city streets I heard a faint whisper from somewhere beneath my feet. I looked around to see where it was coming from and saw the manhole near that old witch's house lifted up just the timiest bit to release a small whisper only I could hear. It said "Quick down here" I knew it was a bad decision and I still do but I went down that manhole and saw to my surprise a gathering of over five hundred of my kinsman and some certain officers within his army. "AAAAAAR***HH it's an ambush!" I screamed but Salacin put his hand over my mouth and shushed me. "But he has generals here oh woe what shall I do." Once again I was shushed so I took the hint and shut myself up. "We your kinsmen and a select few officers have grown tired of his tirade and wish to end his life." Salacin said "But if he finds out you will all be executed!" "Not as long as we keep to ourselves and do not openly challenge him." "Ok but why did you call me here I can be of no assistance." "But yes you can we all believe you may be the one to stop him and all those ******** that sere him, Guthix forgive me." "What do you want me to do?" "We need someone that can get close to him and try to find a weakness so that we can destroy him from the inside, freeing our people after 3 years of torment." "So let me get this straight, you want me to infiltrate his private guard, get close to him, find out a fatal weakness and exploit it?" "Basically yes." "Sign me up I am willing to follow this cause until my last breath." "Okay we shall see you tomorrow come to the manhole for all your briefing, the officers on our side shall tell you how to become close to him." So I clambered out of that dank sewer and walked home, my mind wasn't truly with me that night so I do not know how I safely returned home, but I do know one thing. That is that I am part of a greater cause much larger than myself. One of which that can bring our people FREEDOM! Chapter 2 By the time I got home I had thought of every escape plan to not be in this "resistance", but the best I came up with was taking my life so that I wouldn't have to go through all this, the one down-side of this tactic is the obvious fact that I would be dead. My dreams were terrifying that night mostly constituted of death and bloodshed but as I woke from these turbulent night-horrors I knew it was my duty to my people to get rid of him. The next day I walked to the old witches house and entered the manhole. Suddenly I was attacked out of nowhere; it was one of the rebellious officers "Defend Yourself!" he screamed trying to catch me off-guard, but luckily due to early training I recieved when his rule first came to be I was able to dodge the attack and retaliate with some quick glancing blows to his neack and spine paralysing him from the waist down(not permanantly of course I'm a druid for Guthix sake) "Well done my good sir, you proved yourself useful to the cause. Sorry about the attack but it was necessary to evaluate your skills." Salacin piped from somewhere unknown. "What? I could've been killed you egomaniacal psycho!" I cried at him. "Ah well you're not though so be happy." After a few hours of this banter I was briefed on my mission: infiltrate the enemy's personal guard and find his greatest weakness. Like I didn't know that already but it was necessary to drive that fact into me. I was given papers by one of the officers that would fast-track me into his private guard but only just. I was to be a lowly bodyguard first in the line of defence. It was the best they could do so to get me to the next level the resistance would pretend to attempt a assassination of him and I was to stop them and save his life. I approached his main fortress which had recently been constructed by slave labour and a strange man by the name of Effigy. When I got to the doors Pikkupstix stood in front of me and warned me that I may not return. Then I entered.. Ok to my fans out there (of which there are none as of yet) I'm making this story up as I go along so I'll try to add posts as soon as i can. And if you do read please reply because if you like the storyline and you'd like to see more, you need to comment
  10. Yeah I have to say I quite agree with the first article simply because as a "lower" leveled player I am called a noob when all other players are at my level in one point. Plus we do make a large contribution to the economy because if we weren't there buying your old armours, items or things you can make easily with your higher levels rs would go down the toilet. and I have to say its been a while since I last leveled up simply because I'm not looking for recognition by other players, its like have the "good" rune armor e.g tinted, gold or god. but they have the exact same stats they just cost 10x the amount when instead I could have normal rune and afford to pay for skilling instead of standing in the ge looking for recognition from other players when all that happens is lower levels ask me for money. And I'm not calling those people noobs or anything but it can be frustrating to see that the only attention I get from having "pretty" armour is gettin hassled. and btw I'm one of the people who likes to give away money which I can't do if I've spent all my money on armor. Plus if its not too much of a hassle: is there any other F2P's that are craving a new F2P quest
  11. A link to your clan's website/forums. www.defendersofthestronghold.forumup.com A link to your clan's runehead/memberlist. dunno what that is... List of your clan leaders. srdofjustice Your Clan Initials. DOTS Your Clan's Main Focus.everything basically...skilling warring chatting and there is no banner bcoz i dunno how to make 1 plz help
  12. to come way out of left field here bt did u think it may be a NEW non members quest...
  13. I'd love to be able to say that i have passed the combat 70 milestone and/or get atleast 1 stat into the prestiogious 99
  14. Hi i am a lvl 56 rs player and ive been looking for a half decent clan to join and i was wondering if i could possibly join yours as this sounds like a good clan
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