Well, good for a beginner, and not that I could do any better with pixels, but.. 1: The text was barely readable on that background. Change the color on one of them. 2. 6 [bleep]es are all visible from that view: Stupidity. I think he has 8, and there are 3 visible on each side and 2 in the middle. Plus, there should be some for his back and a tail. 3. It appears he is looking at you, when his body is still facing the side. 4. Nose is too fat and not long enough. 5. Hand is way too small. Okay, I gotta brake the final too ya, instead of just listing it's cons. 3/10