Personally, I don't like it. But, I appriciate that someone new is trying their hand at this. The light source doesn't work for the picture, try toning it down a bit. The background doesn't fit with the images. Text is pretty bad. You need higher quality images, it looks like a cheap crop. Add a focal point. Keep trying. Even if I don't like it, somebody else might. Don't let my critique get you down.