The_Critic

Personally, I don't like it. But, I appriciate that someone new is trying their hand at this. The light source doesn't work for the picture, try toning it down a bit. The background doesn't fit with the images. Text is pretty bad. You need higher quality images, it looks like a cheap crop. Add a focal point. Keep trying. Even if I don't like it, somebody else might. Don't let my critique get you down.

It's a nice concept, but isn't being pulled off very nicely from what I can see. To many things happening at once. Doesn't have "Polish". By that I mean it looks like you rushed the characters. Doesn't have a focal point. ^ Crtique of the first one. Alrighty, for the second one, it is much better but I still have some issues with it. Text looks amature. No noticable focal point. To many characters. The human characters need some more polish and work. Otherwise, you should continue. Good job.