Jump to content

pjb21

Members
  • Posts

    1583
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Posts posted by pjb21

  1. i really dont like that cartoony area, it really doesnt look good imo, may just be me tho...

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    could do with more contrast imo, also darcer, but again, thats me and my morgish mind, heh.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    could try and give it more depth by using a gradient darc in the center and lighter at the edges lightly on a new layer.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    the text is unclear, either duplicate the layer, or if its fairly transparent make it more opake (sp?)

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    lighten the stars, the line looks good tho =)

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    the boarder is kinda harsh, try adding a 1 or 2 px gausion blur and see what it looks like.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    PJB21

  2. kitsu, ioll keep yours in for now, but if you do any more please follow the guidelines.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    as to those who have posted thanks.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    and ive had a thought regarding the transparentness, ill make the bg colour of the template the same colour as the bg of the first post (got this idea from one post that was so)

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    PJB21

  3. hmm, the should sections just fall down to much, its like he doesnt have very much in the way of shoulders o0 i suggest making the top one point out more, on both sides.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    metalic, it needs a brighter highlight to give it a good metalic feel, atm its rather dull.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    havnt really got comments about the chain texturing, im not the kinda person to ask about that since i dont have a clue... at least it looks like a chain as DS said.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    arm arm looks good, right hand doesnt, well, between the fingers it just looks really weird, maybe too much contrast.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    define the muscles more on his left arm, it kinda seems, well its weird around the elbow, make the curves clearer.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    well, thats the chainbody and arms done for now ::'

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    its looking really good tho, so try and finish this =)

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    PJB21

  4. i took it as a heavy burden, but either way its really cool =)

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    i think i can see something along the lines of 'propety of samwise'

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    just opening paint...

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    oh its sauron, lol.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    i just assumed it was more elfish at first glance...

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    but yeah its cool =)

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    PJB21

  5. its pretty cool, spotting a few linework mistakes (my fault #-o )

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    the shading on the main character looks cool and i cant really spot many problems with that, i like the trim effect, but doint forget to shade it =)

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    add a darcer coloured background that white you have atm is rather painful, and having a darc bg can help when pixeling, due to less contrast.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    dont forget the inside of the protaganists hood, that shouldnt be white :wink:

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    the sword looks good, if slightly weird, but i dont know why... :-s

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    the mage could do with some shading as could the spell.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    warriors right hand has the outline missing in places :o

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    its looking good tho, and it also seams to be a popular linework, its always intresting to see what people can do with the same starting point =)

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    PJB21

  6. yeah that [bleep]e you pointed out i have since fixed, it was only after taking that screenie that i realised it #-o

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    also im not much of one for many polys, i prefer low poly counts, after all i place every poly myself... takes a not-short time :wink:

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    but thanks for the CC all the same =)

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    PJB21

  7. ok the idea behind it is as goes...

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    close your eyes and dream (well dont close your eyes unless you can telecneticly read....)

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    its a darc place, a forest a jungle or similar. you are walking along exploring with your 'cronies' suddently out of the corner of you eye you capture a glimpse of light. in this darc area it seams strange. intrigued you go too see what is happening. step by step you get closer, the light grows brighter, glowing. you get close to it, you can alomst touch it. its weird, unusaral. youve never seen anything like it before. one of your friends is back behind you, dragging back quite a way, due to alot of heavy equipment. you pick up the object. its very heavy despite its small size. you see the glow it emits despite being solid and not a single light adorns it. you listen to it. like a clockwork pocke[bleep]ch it is ticking in scyn to nature itself. one of your friends asks to look at it, so you let them. as it transfers hand it glows brighter. your friend walking last is still struggling under the massive weight. he feels the darc is closing in on him. a tree root is there across the path, he doesnt see it. a stumble, a trip and hes on the floor, the weight of the equipment crushing down on him. he has a very important object around his neck, he musnt get crushed. hes trying to hold himself up, he calls for help. you hear him as does your friend standing with you, you leave the forenin object and run to help him. the object spins in the air where you left it. you run onwards towards your friend in the ground. tick tick tick. the object spirals towards the ground. a meer blade of glass prods into is at it falls against the ground. everything slows down for your friend on the ground. he see you running towards him, hes struggling under the weight. the light glows brighter. silence. a bright ring of light erupted from where you once were. the trees vaporise. it [bleep]es you in the back. the squarks of small animals scream out everywhere. yet its still silent. a small rodent like creature stumbles foward, you see it. trip after trip, over its own legs. its claws flail around in hurry. you dont understand. nothing but this rodent fills your vision, only a painfuly bright glow. the animal vanishes unto the light.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    the image image is what your heavy burdened friend see's just before your final sight.

×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

By using this site, you agree to our Terms of Use.