Fallon

The colour you've used, magenta, is like another version of purple. Yet the text says 'Pink Mayhem'. I think magenta is made up of equal amounts of red and blue, which would make it purple....

Pink rocks, but magenta is a variant of purple.

An Octopus with 10 (visible) tentacles.....

what do you mean? I cant see a bib anywhere... Either that or he is wearing his top back-to-front, he's bending his arms back and he has an amazing neck turning ability.

It's a bit odd for a fully grown man to wear a bib.

So does Redbeard Frank:

If you can't deal with greedy people, your life's going to be a real pain.

I agree. Also, it should be damn instead of dam.

That's actually the picture I based it on. Now that it's half term (finally), i've got no homework, so I'll be devoting my time one this peice of work.

Sorry, i may not be able to get an update, for about a day or two, because I have loads of homework. I'll try to get an update tomorrow when i may have more time.

Please only post constructive criticism, I don't care if you like it/hate it. Also, could you please post ideas for the background.

I've had a countless number of mazes, but no mimes, =(. I always have auto-retaliate off. It's a shame i've never had a mime, I love mimes in real life.