well on the right guy the shading could have been correct if he was standing in front of a fire, but then his upper body should have been very dark.. but the left character has a different shading then him give them both the same shading , about the left character you used from my tutorial (well same pose and all) i dont really mind if its for practice, i think its good to practice like that as long as you dont try selling it.., but you did make some mistakes on it that i made to on my.. theright hand for instance.. made a mistake on that and the eyes are like black beads.. made that mistake to.. i like your line art, some mistakes here and there, tho you made the mage look a little to simple for my taste, work on that.. edit:Dreamlove, course they can.. i take a walk on the sun every sunday morning i always sweat like hell when i get back.. good for losing weight.. only problem is i dont need to lose weight..