dragoncmd Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 This is play I am writing, it is meant to be sung, but because of my lack of musical talent I am leaving the tune to your imagination. Currently I only have The Prelude and Act I finished. I would appreciate if anyone could take the time to proofread this. Thanks. Characters: Juwelen Schaduw - War hero and leader of unknown rank Litava Liucht - The daughter of a prestigious senator, she loves juwelen Arguine Liucht - A prestigous senator, he loves his daughter, and wants to secure her position after his death Master of Shadows - An unknown person who hates the Liucht Family Prelude A Hero's Death Prologue (spoken, Narrator): As he lived he died As he died he lived A warriors death The Boatman took The diamond of the world. The Battle (Sung, Juwelen Schaduw): As blood falls around me we die As oil pours from these Walls we burn A Death fit for a hero but not for me Take it back death! Take it back! I Have a wife I love, I don't wish her pain! I have a wife I love! Don't Make it Rain Blood from the sky! But our cause is just We must triumph But our cause is just Our deaths will save Those we love So this is how I died Act I The Shadow's Song everywhere> Chorus: We are the blank Spots of your world. We are the blank hole in your mind. We don't exist. We never did. Forget that we are here. We listen to your secrets. We listen to your doubts. Everything you've said was heard by us. We take your mind but never did be-cause... We are the Blank spot of your world. In darkness we are one In light not at all escape us if you will, You will only escape a mirage, For We are the Blank spot of your world. Look behind you we are there. Or perhaps in front instead Head away from the light, Head towards us, But never find We are the blank spot of your world Chorus Noone has this voice... A Loving Day Litava: You Don't understand me! You listen to those fools I love that man with all my soul Forget your arrangements Fa-Ther Arguine: He might be rought around the edges but he is a good man Listen to me daughter Listen to me now He will secure your life He will allow you to live After I am gone Litava: He is a friend; That I do not doubt, But listen to your words Listen to your heart Listen to me Guynuwhire is a good man But I have my eye on another Arguine: Who? Litava: One that you know One that you don't Let him come to you, Don't force me. Arguine: I trust your intentions I trust your heart Your innocence I do not I will leave you be, But I hope you think on the wisdom of your act. Litava: He Worries to much My love will protect Himself and Me. Oh, his valor is known around His virtue shall be given unto me. Who is this I hear Is it she who promised to me Let me love being near Her beauty in heart and mind Litava and voice: I love but I don't know Who he/she is Will we be together, or are we doomed apart Let us be with me Let us be with you A perfect union of two Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necromagus Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 Just out of curiosity, what's with all the (semi) Dutch names? My Tip.It Times Articles (10 and counting) || The Varrock Library Author Index projectDo you dare to dream? - Part 19 added. || The Hospital (WIP) - New story!Necromagus looks like a viking ... with glasses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xewleer Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 man, thats really confusing for me!!! But you killed the hero in the prelude...? I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncmd Posted March 27, 2007 Author Share Posted March 27, 2007 Necro: Yes they are, I'll be messing with the spelling but the basis is dutch (no I do not speak dutch, its called a dictionary) Xewleer: Yes he died in the prelude, The story is of what leads him to that point. Should I continue? I only really had the shadow song formed in my mind when I started this, no real story. I'm slowly working on that. Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xewleer Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 If you want, but I'm not gifted with the discernment of verse like yours... no offense meant... I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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