This is play I am writing, it is meant to be sung, but because of my lack of musical talent I am leaving the tune to your imagination. Currently I only have The Prelude and Act I finished. I would appreciate if anyone could take the time to proofread this. Thanks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Characters:

 

 

 

Juwelen Schaduw - War hero and leader of unknown rank

 

 

 

Litava Liucht - The daughter of a prestigious senator, she loves juwelen

 

 

 

Arguine Liucht - A prestigous senator, he loves his daughter, and wants to secure her position after his death

 

 

 

Master of Shadows - An unknown person who hates the Liucht Family

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Prelude

 

 

 

A Hero's Death

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Prologue (spoken, Narrator):

 

 

 

As he lived he died

 

 

 

As he died he lived

 

 

 

A warriors death

 

 

 

The Boatman took

 

 

 

The diamond of the world.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Battle (Sung, Juwelen Schaduw):

 

 

 

As blood falls around me we die

 

 

 

As oil pours from these Walls we burn

 

 

 

A Death fit for a hero but not for me

 

 

 

Take it back death!

 

 

 

Take it back!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I Have a wife I love,

 

 

 

I don't wish her pain!

 

 

 

I have a wife I love!

 

 

 

Don't Make it Rain

 

 

 

Blood from the sky!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But our cause is just

 

 

 

We must triumph

 

 

 

But our cause is just

 

 

 

Our deaths will save

 

 

 

Those we love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So this is how I died

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Act I

 

 

 

The Shadow's Song

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Chorus:

 

 

 

We are the blank Spots of your world.

 

 

 

We are the blank hole in your mind.

 

 

 

We don't exist.

 

 

 

We never did.

 

 

 

Forget that we are here.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

We listen to your secrets.

 

 

 

We listen to your doubts.

 

 

 

Everything you've said was heard by us.

 

 

 

We take your mind but never did be-cause...

 

 

 

We are the Blank spot of your world.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In darkness we are one

 

 

 

In light not at all

 

 

 

escape us if you will,

 

 

 

You will only escape a mirage, For

 

 

 

We are the Blank spot of your world.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Look behind you we are there.

 

 

 

Or perhaps in front instead

 

 

 

Head away from the light,

 

 

 

Head towards us, But never find

 

 

 

We are the blank spot of your world

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chorus

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Noone has this voice...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A Loving Day

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Litava:

 

 

 

You Don't understand me!

 

 

 

You listen to those fools

 

 

 

I love that man with all my soul

 

 

 

Forget your arrangements

 

 

 

Fa-Ther

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Arguine:

 

 

 

He might be rought around the edges but he is a good man

 

 

 

Listen to me daughter

 

 

 

Listen to me now

 

 

 

He will secure your life

 

 

 

He will allow you to live

 

 

 

After I am gone

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Litava:

 

 

 

He is a friend;

 

 

 

That I do not doubt,

 

 

 

But listen to your words

 

 

 

Listen to your heart

 

 

 

Listen to me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Guynuwhire is a good man

 

 

 

But I have my eye on another

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Arguine:

 

 

 

Who?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Litava:

 

 

 

One that you know

 

 

 

One that you don't

 

 

 

Let him come to you,

 

 

 

Don't force me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Arguine:

 

 

 

I trust your intentions

 

 

 

I trust your heart

 

 

 

Your innocence I do not

 

 

 

I will leave you be,

 

 

 

But I hope you think on the wisdom of your act.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Litava:

 

 

 

He Worries to much

 

 

 

My love will protect

 

 

 

Himself and Me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh, his valor is known around

 

 

 

His virtue shall be given unto me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Who is this I hear

 

 

 

Is it she who promised to me

 

 

 

Let me love being near

 

 

 

Her beauty in heart and mind

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Litava and voice:

 

 

 

I love but I don't know

 

 

 

Who he/she is

 

 

 

Will we be together,

 

 

 

or are we doomed apart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Let us be with me

 

 

 

Let us be with you

 

 

 

A perfect union of two

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just out of curiosity, what's with all the (semi) Dutch names?

man, thats really confusing for me!!! But you killed the hero in the prelude...?

Necro: Yes they are, I'll be messing with the spelling but the basis is dutch (no I do not speak dutch, its called a dictionary)

 

 

 

Xewleer: Yes he died in the prelude, The story is of what leads him to that point.

 

 

 

Should I continue? I only really had the shadow song formed in my mind when I started this, no real story. I'm slowly working on that.

If you want, but I'm not gifted with the discernment of verse like yours... no offense meant...