kyle99 Posted March 28, 2007 Share Posted March 28, 2007 This is my first Pixel, plz rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Errdoth Posted March 28, 2007 Share Posted March 28, 2007 Why did you post this? Because he wanted critique on his work. Why else? Even though we all know that peoples first pixels are generally horrid, and most people don't really want to look at them, just the fact of him posting that means he is open to suggestions and wants to improve. So I challenge you, at least point him in the right direction instead of shoving him off. On topic: Mainly what I said above, though not bad for a first pixel, it lacks shading and life really. It's just kind of plain and 'copyrighted' in the sense that it lacks originality. I would try to work more on human forms, and work on your shading. Just my opinion though. Last.fm Signature Overlays Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterxman Posted March 28, 2007 Share Posted March 28, 2007 Spam removed from this topic. He posted this to get this rated, no more flame bait. Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faelenof Posted March 28, 2007 Share Posted March 28, 2007 'ello Kyle. :D A rather typical first pixel, to be honest. Unoriginal idea, really. :| I always seem to see ancient staves as first pixels. ;_; No shading that I can see... and not much else to rate. :| You'll be best off checking out the Gallery Forum FAQ Announcement (linked for your convenience), and checking out IV. User Guides. Check out a few of the guides there (I recommend DementedHero's and Terley's guides, and ImHomer's one is great too), use some of their tips, and make a scene - not just an item from RuneScape as that doesn't really leave for much creativity or showing any pixelling effort at all. Good luck, Kyle. :) Pixel Artist - Former Player Mod - Former Tip.It ModNot taking sig requests - sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeonardMart Posted March 28, 2007 Share Posted March 28, 2007 the ppl have said everything but one... make the circle of the stave a bit thinner :P Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Syd Posted March 30, 2007 Share Posted March 30, 2007 Add some shadows to make it lot better! :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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