my first pixel in ms paint!

[jepa69]

yea im jk

 

 

 

its not guys

 

 

 

not another of those topics

 

 

 

but i do have a pear!

 

 

 

 

 

 

cc plzzz

 

 

 

yea eew pillow shading

[LeonardMart]

hey thats not ur first pixel ive seen more from you...

 

 

 

on topic i think the pear is too small. make it easily the most important thing in the pic (like ur apple) and good quality pears are more green than brown. also u give too much importance to the background, just make its simple so it doesnt distract from the main pic

 

 

 

and for the leaf use maybe a less saturated green.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also you used "pillow shadig" (light on the middle and dark in the edges) which is not the best shading, so put a light source on the sides, and locate the shades accordingly

[rik]

read a bit better: it is his first pixel in MS Paint, i think he did his pixels before this one with Graphics Gale..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok the pear needs a bit more shading, the leaf could use some better shading: not just some lighter lines search for an exemple and i hope u will see what i mean :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Then also chance the text, the font doens't fit and the colors also doesn't fit. Use a dark red color maybe, i dont know if that looks better but i think so :wink:

[born2die]

nice shape

 

 

 

nice background

 

 

 

bad pillow shading

[jepa69]

just to clear it up that this is not my first pixel

 

 

 

i know i pillow shaded

 

 

 

beware, for a sig may come soon

[jepa69]

eek rough linework!

 

 

 

[Captainkidd]

I am begging to think you like fruit or are hungary all the time, first the apple now the pear, you know they got food stamps so you can eat somthing

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It was a joke I am just kidding about how you don't eat :-$ :