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born2die

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  1. I for one want to see it pixel but I would make it 4 to 5 times smaller if you pixel it
  2. you colors are way to saturated especially in the sky and flag it also lacks contrast and the sky isn't the same color all over it becomes lighter downwards
  3. why didn't you cleaned up your lines befor you started shading
  4. don't be afraid to put contrast into you picture especialy on pieces this small
  5. no the point is to make him look liek a dwarf hehe I didn't want to cover up the drarf look with the beard but acentuate it :D hehe and thank you for thenice comments veichity you can have that avatar
  6. ty lovelydude changed that tought he kinda looked like a dwarf so I added a beard
  7. I want a bunny head on a rope ... no body
  8. thank you for all the kind words everyone and terley i realalise i still have mayor anotomy problems I'm sketching my [wagon] of trying to improve just that and yes rik you can have the pirates of the caribian avatar but not the thunderstorm one sig per person atm if no-one ells wants it you can have the thunderstrom one to ... plz don't pm me regarding these things but discuss them here xD I'm saying this because I just had to remove 6 costum requests, and I don't feel like doing this alot. :lol: ow and I'm working on this atm 15 minutes far but feel free to CC ow and any ideas what to do to make it more intersting because it kinda plain right now ... and don't say add a santa or I will have to shoot you xD
  9. does it say giving away ! NO and don't pm iether
  10. well the reason why I didn't post for so long is whenever i got here, there were 10+ "firts pixel sig"s on the first page. and now it still has alot ... but yeah. a little less ty for the cc everyone altough I don't have the time to change anything the deadline was today anyway since I started posting here anyway going to show some more works and wips The finished works I will not be changing anymore the wips you may shower with CC and I will listen to it ! anyway finished : <= giving away <= giving away <= giving away <= giving away (c64 colors)<= giving away work in progress :
  11. nice shape nice background bad pillow shading
  12. omg I love this one best u made so far in my opinion little blurry. but that gives it the winning look. pure genious... ow and yeah.... the other onces are nice to
  13. actually there are quite a few mayor mistakes for the first one. since the sun is directly behind everything... all shapes you see should be silhouettes. with a light border around it ... you also need to use alot more saturated collors the flashy collors hurt your eyes. I for one have never seen the sun like that a yellow ball... try and make it white in the middle ( never be afraid to use pure white) and the more u go away from the center you go to yellow-orange-red but don't do this like a ball enlarging. stretch it out along the horizon something like this ( note how the cliff is a silhouette ) also pay attention to the things nagzul said he might not brouth it to you in the nicest way, but it has a kind of hard truth. just put more time in your sig more then 10-15 minutes....
  14. Verry nice and since you are sick of this piece my only cc will be make the border more obvious really lick the bricks and the text and the way you handled the chainmail with is one of the hardest things to pixel if you can't figure out the right technique.
  15. I don't mind at all glad I could help you out. the whole meaning of the edit it that you could learn out of it :wink: the cliff is looking alot better good work
  16. I love your piguins there are a few things wrong with this sig tough - the sword is pillow shaded - the light is comming from all over the place ( looking on the pinguins back and belly it would look like there are 2 lightsources ... from each side of the pinguin or the lightsource is directly begind it... its kind of confusing. then the mountains and the cliff don't know where your lightsource is coming from -The sig needs alot more contrast -the mountains just stop and go to grass I'll post a picture soon to give u an idea put it the first round of idol now and thats the only good round... xD So i'll get bac to this later EDIT: here you go xD
  17. U actually want CC and rates on these okey since there is almost no effort put into this 0.5/10 there just 3 buddy's not even pasted right on eachother ( looking at the red guy)on a grey background there is no border no nothing. and for cc don't use buddy's make caracters yourself so much more fun and you are free to use whatever pose u want ... and put some time in your sigs and avatars who knows maybe the rs edited screesnhot will be beter but this ! I honestly can't say anything good about these
  18. -the arrmor doesn't really look metalic, metal is shiny, the highlights should be brighter -I also feel that there isn't much contrats in your sigs and therefor not much depth. -then again you put alot of contrast in the mountains in the background, but the furder away things are the less detail you seen and maybe it would be better if there was less contrast in the background then there is in the foreground, because you would draw alot of attetion to the background that way. here you see the furder away things are the less clear you see them and the more they blend into the sky -the necks seem a bit wide and the head seem a bit to big in proportion to the body -don't get me wrong it much beter then most pixels u see around here. made a quick edit to give you an idea about the metalic shine
  19. Nice pixel could use some more contrast and if u aren't going to make a bg I would at least pick an other collor then the white
  20. Posting pictures of yourself is against the rules of this forum So i think your are going to have to remove that part
  21. It is better then most first pixels i've seen here so thats a big + try useing mroe contrast in your colors and add highlights now you only got 1 color shades
  22. lol cool \ to bad it ended badly was A verry nice topic
  23. linework is messy hand are circels his left arm looks like its on backwards his his head look like its ballancing on a triangle ( " neck?" ) his legs are way to short and in a verry odd position his feather looks like its been run over by a truck then fell down the grand canyon was set on fire and then was put on the helm actually I really can say if anything is good on this piece! I would if i was you darw something on PAPER, ask your family if it looks okey ... scan it, take a picture of it..... and put it on your pc or whatever and then start... tracing the lines u drew .... because it pretty obvious that the whole drawing with a mouse thing isn't working :P
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