Image Manipulation

[Ozzy_Patrick]

Just did this, first I have done in quite a bit because of a lot of college work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Original photo by Jovialimp - http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54214915/

 

 

 

comments, C/C, etc. appreciated.

[Evilperson]

I like it overall. My only crit would have to be that the lines of the colors are too solid. It looks like you should have used a softer brush.

[Zoidnerd]

theres something that just makes it feel, unrealistic. cant pinpoint it.

 

 

 

but i love the flow of color, and i love the text

[Ozzy_Patrick]

Thanks for the comments. I've made a version with those sharper lines blurred, though I think it makes it look a little too wishy-washy...

 

 

 

 

 

 

And most of the factors make it pretty unrealistic, the wierd waves comming from the sun, the fact that the sky is dark while the sun is out, etc.

[navyplaya]

I personally really like it. The thing that bothers me is that the text doesn't flow with the streams coming out of the sun. Try changing the position or the curvature of the text to help it flow better. Other than that I like it alot.

 

 

 

~Navy

 

 

 

edit: a smoother flatter text might work better as well

[Ozzy_Patrick]

Thanks, I've been meaning to try out what you suggested but haven't got around to it because of college work. By a smoother, flatter text do you mean one without any warping effects on it?

[-Hurricane]

Looks good, nice one, great text 8/10.