alyssalarue Posted May 23, 2007 Share Posted May 23, 2007 I got the inspiration for this poem while playing beach volleyball yesterday. I think it is quite catchy. It works with any name or gender, but for now I'll use mine. Tell me what you think: (If you say it out loud it comes to life more.) So began the volleyball match. All the girls readied themselves behind either side of the net. Each side not wanting to let the ball fall; that the ball once in the air wouldn't be met, as each girl took a breath, before sending it back over the net. The tension rose in the hall, as each side gave it their all, to stall the fall of the ball until it could again be sent over the net, having faced down another threat. Finally, the moment arose for a winner to be chose. The ball sailed over the net, to a girl named Alyssa, who carefully fixed her eyes on the ball, she knew this was now her call. As the ball came to her, she sent it sailing back high over the net. For a moment the ball hung briefly in the air, the suspense was almost too much to bare. Alyssa was the only one who knew what this ball was about to do. For she had hit the ball into the air with such care, making the opposition jump high in the air. So high they jumped, it caused their pants to fall, thus missing the ball! Alyssa was now the hero in the hall!! Thats all. I hope you had a ball! ~Alyssa :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zaquierming Posted May 23, 2007 Share Posted May 23, 2007 Moved to Varrock Library. Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-I took the one less traveled by,And that has made all the difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 Ok I didn't really like it but it did have a poetic beat to it. So it is a poem. Ummm there wasn't anything there though that was really eyecatching though... http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Posted May 26, 2007 Share Posted May 26, 2007 Ok I didn't really like it but it did have a poetic beat to it. So it is a poem. Ummm there wasn't anything there though that was really eyecatching though... hello? pants falling!! :roll: Popoto.~<3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted May 26, 2007 Share Posted May 26, 2007 :oops: I meant in the poetic sense, there was nothing that I saw and thought I really want to read this. *Pokes tongue out* http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Bacon_Man Posted May 27, 2007 Share Posted May 27, 2007 the suspense was almost too much to bare. Too much to bear. Honestly, it wasn't my favorite, too much repetition of the same words, but a good beginning. Tetris is about using the equal force of the working power to build up the glorious people's republic of Russia.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twist of Fate Posted May 28, 2007 Share Posted May 28, 2007 Could be better IMO Check out the band on Facebook! - http://www.facebook.com/bhofficialnjYouTube - http://www.youtube.c...enhingeofficial Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flametrooper Posted May 31, 2007 Share Posted May 31, 2007 Interesting style. :-k Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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