Guess the text needs improving O:)

the greens need improving, especially in colour choice. get less saturated greens.

 

 

 

ill just say that theres a huge lack in shading

 

 

 

the objects placed on the grass (character, chinchompas, box traps, etc) seem more to be hovering. add a shadow below them and draw bended grass and stuff to show theyre on the floor

 

 

 

and theres something called the text tool

 

 

 

o, by the way, its too big for a sig, and its around 36kb

i know the grass is kinda bad :oops: but its my first pixel art :XD:

The sky looks very simple, including the clouds and the sun. Could use more work :wink:

 

And there are 2 black dots at the left.

Very nice, 7/10. Heres what i think you can improve on:

 

 

 

1) Choose a better colour for the sky, or blend in a few colours. The clouds are ugly :? Try making them transparent so they seem to blend into the sky, and just fix their overall look. Also fix the sun.

 

 

 

2) The grass is great, but the plants and leaves are a bit plain, maybe add some more texture.

 

 

 

3) The character and trees could use some more texturing.

 

 

 

4) The text doesnt look too good, try to fix that.

Grass looks too uniform.

 

 

 

Limited shading on everything else. Doesn't fit with the grass.

 

 

 

The sky looks like you spent 30 seconds on it, fix it up.

 

 

 

 

 

Nothing too terribly special really.