ZidaneCT Posted May 26, 2007 Share Posted May 26, 2007 Author Notes: The idea for this chapter (and the overall storyline) is based on about two years of thought processes. Still, until I got words on paper, I really didn't know how it would turn out. The main thing, I was lazy to write this - so this was actually a three parter I wrote for my "Expression Workshops" in English 101. This is based on the FMA universe, and this would be about ~85 years since the end of the Anime. Melanie is related to Edward in bloodline (we assume Edward/Al returned to the world of Alchemy, that's explained further in the plot). This chapter itself is about 2/5th into the story. This was really a test to see what I could do, and I believe I have a better idea of where to go. Any comments, constructive criticism, or hate mail would be fine. Enjoy. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- { The Alchemist from the Other Side ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ New Aquroya } ~ By Matthew Russell ~ [ Draft V.2.1 ] Stepping off the train, onto the concrete platform of the train station, Matthew glanced at the golden margined paper he held between his fingers. It was just yesterday that he had officially became a State Alchemist, by sheer luck at first, and through hard work studying and passing the state alchemy exams. He glanced at his official title shown on the paper, with a smirk on his face ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ the ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅTwin Bladed Alchemist.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà ~ Proud Original Founder of the Tip.it Events Team (TET) ~ ~ Leader of the Runescape Party Host Committee (RPHC) ~ "There's no such thing as a never-ending story," You murmured as you looked away... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xewleer Posted May 27, 2007 Share Posted May 27, 2007 =D> very excellent story, I didn't much like FMA (give Host club or Haruhi any day) but I do like this! do some more! I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
primadog Posted May 29, 2007 Share Posted May 29, 2007 tsk tsk *Time seemed to stop for the both of them, while both were deep in* NOT RATED G FOLKS! All I learned in life, I learned on Tip.it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZidaneCT Posted May 29, 2007 Author Share Posted May 29, 2007 tsk tsk *Time seemed to stop for the both of them, while both were deep in* NOT RATED G FOLKS! Pfft. Bad Prima. Wash your mind out with soap. ~ZidaneCT ~ Proud Original Founder of the Tip.it Events Team (TET) ~ ~ Leader of the Runescape Party Host Committee (RPHC) ~ "There's no such thing as a never-ending story," You murmured as you looked away... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejayfan94 Posted June 30, 2007 Share Posted June 30, 2007 That was awsome. I like how youbased it on FMA which is on right now so ill keep this short. :D :D KEEP WRITING!!! HomerSPC's Lets Plays : : Minecraft, Portal, Halo and more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sephiroth_king Posted June 30, 2007 Share Posted June 30, 2007 *Sniffs the air as though a sweet scent was flowing through it* I smell review. :P I'll add you to the review library right away. Request a review by posting a request in the thread, and since I won't be here for 2 weeks, request it and I hope Xewleehr will be able to do it (He said tonight or tomorrow night). He is looking for one to do. (Along with bluejayfan's request).:D I loved FMA, and you should keep going. Now. Hoping to get a new Signature (with matching avatar) soon. :D In the meantime...Steam username: )I'll rewrite it later (add me if you want) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ember3579 Posted June 30, 2007 Share Posted June 30, 2007 *Sniffs the air 5 hours later* I think there's something else in the air as well ;) This is quite easily one of the best stories I have ever read that wasn't in book form or involved "adult" themes. :wink: 10/10 =D> =D> :thumbsup: :thumbsup: You never know which rabbit hole you jump into will lead to Wonderland. - Ember3579Aku Soku Zan. - ShinsengumiYou wanna mess with me or my friends? Pick your poison.If you have any complaints about me, please refer to this link. Your problems are important to me.Don't talk smack if you're not willing to say it to the person's face. On the same line, if you're not willing to back up your opinions no matter what, your opinion may as well be nonexistent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
primadog Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 one of these days I'll actually read this thing. Until then, MAKE ME! muahahahhaha All I learned in life, I learned on Tip.it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluejayfan94 Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 We will all make you read it. :twisted: :twisted: Its really good. :thumbsup: HomerSPC's Lets Plays : : Minecraft, Portal, Halo and more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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