Sir_Erderik Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 Drawing a knight with pencil cuz im bored. Please post any corrections I can make to the drawing itself or the persons anatomy. Thank you and enjoy my progress. [hide=Previous] First: Second: Third: [/hide] Heres the newest version: When he's finished, he'll be fully armored. I don't plan on making a really detailed background though. Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeonardMart Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 his head is just a hair too much to the right. and i think the legs are too open. the forearms look too thin to me, but that may be me. and maybe make the torso longer? i read that when you see something wrong with it and you dont know what it is, you surely made the hips too high. (which causes a too short torso) Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 Ive made a few corrections in paint, I just show the lines and the propotions. (I resized it, didnt want to) CC: -His left area could use more work, some parts are too low. (Shoulder and elbow) -His knee is in a strange position also. -His left foot is to open, compared to the right foot which is correct. Im sure someone else could give a more detailed description :wink: Its looking good so far, I wonder what the result will be. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovelydude Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 People have necks. Rather long ones too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted June 9, 2007 Author Share Posted June 9, 2007 Thanks for all the advise, working on changing it right now and i'll upload the newer picture when it looks better. Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Echofish Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 He looks like he's slouching. Give his shoulders a bit more angle and it'll be fine. The sword should also be a bit longer since it's supposed to touch the ground (if it's not, then ignore it ^.^) Just draw it a bit longer, round the length of the foot and it should be fine Ultra Unholy,Hearted Machine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted June 9, 2007 Author Share Posted June 9, 2007 He looks like he's slouching. Give his shoulders a bit more angle and it'll be fine. The sword should also be a bit longer since it's supposed to touch the ground (if it's not, then ignore it ^.^) Just draw it a bit longer, round the length of the foot and it should be fine I made the sword longer on my drawing, didn't scan it up though. The reason his shoulders look like that is because he's relaxed (Like posing for a painting, in really heavy armor.) Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted June 11, 2007 Author Share Posted June 11, 2007 Added leg armor and detailed the sword and other stuff on there. Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted June 13, 2007 Author Share Posted June 13, 2007 Armored and shaded his left leg. Added more details to the sword (hilt mainly). Made the lighting a little better. Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted June 16, 2007 Share Posted June 16, 2007 Indeed, his legs need to be longer. I'm looking forward to seeing the finished drawing tough, I think it will turn out quite good. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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