Drawing a knight with pencil cuz im bored. Please post any corrections I can make to the drawing itself or the persons anatomy. Thank you and enjoy my progress.

 

 

 

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Heres the newest version:

 

 

 

 

When he's finished, he'll be fully armored. I don't plan on making a really detailed background though.

his head is just a hair too much to the right. and i think the legs are too open. the forearms look too thin to me, but that may be me. and maybe make the torso longer? i read that when you see something wrong with it and you dont know what it is, you surely made the hips too high. (which causes a too short torso)

Ive made a few corrections in paint, I just show the lines and the propotions.

 

 

 

(I resized it, didnt want to)

 

 

 

 

 

 

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-His left area could use more work, some parts are too low.

 

(Shoulder and elbow)

 

-His knee is in a strange position also.

 

-His left foot is to open, compared to the right foot which is correct.

 

 

 

Im sure someone else could give a more detailed description :wink:

 

 

 

Its looking good so far, I wonder what the result will be.

People have necks. Rather long ones too.

Thanks for all the advise, working on changing it right now and i'll upload the newer picture when it looks better.

He looks like he's slouching. Give his shoulders a bit more angle and it'll be fine. The sword should also be a bit longer since it's supposed to touch the ground (if it's not, then ignore it ^.^) Just draw it a bit longer, round the length of the foot and it should be fine

He looks like he's slouching. Give his shoulders a bit more angle and it'll be fine. The sword should also be a bit longer since it's supposed to touch the ground (if it's not, then ignore it ^.^) Just draw it a bit longer, round the length of the foot and it should be fine

 

 

 

I made the sword longer on my drawing, didn't scan it up though. The reason his shoulders look like that is because he's relaxed (Like posing for a painting, in really heavy armor.)

Added leg armor and detailed the sword and other stuff on there.

Armored and shaded his left leg. Added more details to the sword (hilt mainly). Made the lighting a little better.

Indeed, his legs need to be longer.

 

 

 

I'm looking forward to seeing the finished drawing tough, I think it will turn out quite good.