Mac_The_Rocker Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 Doh' Some things are best left unexamined. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mac_The_Rocker Posted June 10, 2007 Author Share Posted June 10, 2007 Doh' Some things are best left unexamined. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mac_The_Rocker Posted June 10, 2007 Author Share Posted June 10, 2007 Doh' Some things are best left unexamined. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 Well. Its pretty good, but a bit rushed, and the storyline seems to be a bit...bitty. It doesn't so much have a thread as a random sequence of events with not much in common... Just doesn't have a feel to it... http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mac_The_Rocker Posted June 10, 2007 Author Share Posted June 10, 2007 Probably the fact that I'm not so good with BIOs. But hey, to get crits, that's why I'm here. Thanks ;O Some things are best left unexamined. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalTalker Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 Wow, pretty good, you must of worked hard. Its just a bit short though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted June 12, 2007 Share Posted June 12, 2007 AH I have gone blind!!!! No wait you DELEATED!!! the story...Come on put it back. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fist_of_ozzy Posted June 12, 2007 Share Posted June 12, 2007 Alright, get this spam out of here somebody. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Sith Posted June 18, 2007 Share Posted June 18, 2007 What happened to the story? Hopefully you repost it ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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