Zonorhc Posted June 15, 2007 Share Posted June 15, 2007 A commissioned piece for the World of Farland, a d20 campaign setting. Full view (deviantART link). Comments please. Constructive criticism preferred. Varrock Library: Shattered Sky | Silent Thunder | The Emperor's FinestAstri @ MythWeavers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primeaction Posted June 15, 2007 Share Posted June 15, 2007 it looks really good. its a style that ive never seen so keep going with it. its really original and creative. :thumbsup: Not all F2Pers are beggars or scammers, some are respected members, but these respected people are over-populated by these beggar and scammers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThoseTheBrokes Posted June 15, 2007 Share Posted June 15, 2007 I love it, It's so mysterious and pure. I don't know, Fantastic work. I'll watch you on dA if I haven't already. My dA account..retired, as of the 1st January 2008. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted June 15, 2007 Share Posted June 15, 2007 I really like the background. Great work on it. Only thing I would do though, is make the arms a tad big wider. It might just be me (probly is), but I can't really tell which way the character is facing. Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThoseTheBrokes Posted June 15, 2007 Share Posted June 15, 2007 I really like the background. Great work on it. Only thing I would do though, is make the arms a tad big wider. It might just be me (probly is), but I can't really tell which way the character is facing. Forwards, looking to 'her' left, 'our' right. My dA account..retired, as of the 1st January 2008. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
APERSON Posted June 15, 2007 Share Posted June 15, 2007 Frankly, I'm surprised this is a commisioned work. I'm not trying to be mean here, but honest. The folds in his/her clothing seems off as does his/her anatomy (arms seem too long and legs too short). And the whole piece seems to be lacking any real detail, most of it is blurred smudgeyness. The sex of the character remains a mystery aswell, I would say it is a woman because of the hair and smaller frame, but with the complete lack of a bust or even a hint of it, I would have to go with a man. Just what I see, congrats on being commisioned a work though none-the-less. Why should we buy postage stamps when we can make our own?aperson being Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted June 18, 2007 Share Posted June 18, 2007 Love it, looks great. I can't see anything that's wrong with it. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted June 18, 2007 Share Posted June 18, 2007 This is strange, I cant see which way she is walking. It could be forward, or backwards. Just like an optical illusion. I doubt if you see the back or the front of the body. Other than that, it looks good. I really like the signs on the edges of her sleeve. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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