A commissioned piece for the World of Farland, a d20 campaign setting.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Full view (deviantART link).

 

 

 

Comments please. Constructive criticism preferred.

it looks really good. its a style that ive never seen so keep going with it. its really original and creative. :thumbsup:

I love it, It's so mysterious and pure.

 

I don't know, Fantastic work.

 

 

 

I'll watch you on dA if I haven't already.

I really like the background. Great work on it.

 

 

 

Only thing I would do though, is make the arms a tad big wider.

 

 

 

It might just be me (probly is), but I can't really tell which way the character is facing.

I really like the background. Great work on it.

 

 

 

Only thing I would do though, is make the arms a tad big wider.

 

 

 

It might just be me (probly is), but I can't really tell which way the character is facing.

 

 

 

Forwards, looking to 'her' left, 'our' right.

Frankly, I'm surprised this is a commisioned work. I'm not trying to be mean here, but honest. The folds in his/her clothing seems off as does his/her anatomy (arms seem too long and legs too short). And the whole piece seems to be lacking any real detail, most of it is blurred smudgeyness. The sex of the character remains a mystery aswell, I would say it is a woman because of the hair and smaller frame, but with the complete lack of a bust or even a hint of it, I would have to go with a man. Just what I see, congrats on being commisioned a work though none-the-less.

Love it, looks great.

 

 

 

I can't see anything that's wrong with it.

This is strange, I cant see which way she is walking. It could be forward, or backwards. Just like an optical illusion. I doubt if you see the back or the front of the body.

 

 

 

Other than that, it looks good. I really like the signs on the edges of her sleeve.