Quer_Skulll Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 http://img176.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img176& ... ing0ej.jpg i need some C/C on it there are going to be allot more pre sketches then this one.. as it as pre sketch there are going to be allot of final sketches out of this to, its reasons i can't tell at the moment some secret stuff.. so i whant to make room for lots of improvement for next coming sketches because i whant the end results to be perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstreaEvania Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 It looks pretty good to me. The hands seem a little odd and there's definately something wrong about the feet, can't really put it into words... :? Always & Forever, ÃÆÃââââ¬Ã Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zonorhc Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 Hold the swords closer to the crossguard :wink:. It helps balance. Maybe make his feet further apart, as it has more threatening overtones. I can't really comment too much on the cloth, since I'm still learning how to draw it properly. Overall, nice concept. You'll improve as you go. Varrock Library: Shattered Sky | Silent Thunder | The Emperor's FinestAstri @ MythWeavers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted January 29, 2005 Author Share Posted January 29, 2005 It looks pretty good to me. The hands seem a little odd and there's definately something wrong about the feet, can't really put it into words... :? Always & Forever, ÃÆÃââââ¬Ã yeah i had the same thing but i cant seem to find out how to fix it (you can see the eraser marks all over) ill try to fix it thank you for your comment did i mention that theres going to be a whole set of these? with different clothing sometimes and different faces & weapons so the next one whill have a front view i think im better at those.. edit: thank zon you ill try that in the next back view ill make :D i see i've messed up the entire body structure now.. ill make a new one tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tttia Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 The feet are actually not too bad. The main problem I see with them is that they are both exactly pointing forward with very little space between them. An assassin especially would have better balance than that, probably a wider stance etc. The left shoulder goes out too far making the guy seem a bit thick at the top which accentuates the narrow feet. The right arm is not bad, but the left one shows almost a bend backwards...not possible. Also, while you at times might have a cloth that spirals around an arm like that usually it is not the case in quite that fasion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Witty-Fool Posted January 30, 2005 Share Posted January 30, 2005 Almost everything looks anatomically incorrect or impossible. I suggest you get someone to stand still for you and draw from the model. Or sketch from photos, magazines, whatever to get the basic idea of the body. Your technique's not too bad. ~witty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dyronamics Posted January 30, 2005 Share Posted January 30, 2005 Hmm.... The stance and design of the picture makes it look as if you drew the torso, arms and head correctly.... ....facing forwards, while the feet and head are facing the other way. I'm saying this because theres a slight curve to both arms which give the impression of being slightly raised. Unless hes double jointed he cant bend his arms backwards like that. It also looks like the shoulders are leaning slightly towards us. The shading on the boots and arms give it a soft clothy feel, which looks ok for the arms but on the boots it.... well makes it look like hes wearing socks. - I'll post more later, bit busy atm :) Superknight/Blademaster: Level 150; Hps: 132Theoretical damage per round: 234Highest recorded damage in one round: 104 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted January 30, 2005 Author Share Posted January 30, 2005 thanks for the powerfull C/C everyone im going to work it in the next drawing i think its safe to say that the drawing above was the worst since summer 2004 i dont ik really good at the back views never done that before.. thank you witty for the powerfull c/c and you to tttia and dyro. next two are going to be front view and other characters.. still assassins tho.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame_reece Posted January 30, 2005 Share Posted January 30, 2005 thanks for the powerfull C/C everyone im going to work it in the next drawing i think its safe to say that the drawing above was the worst since summer 2004 i dont ik really good at the back views never done that before.. thank you witty for the powerfull c/c and you to tttia and dyro. next two are going to be front view and other characters.. still assassins tho.. Nice work there reminds me of the type of sketchs my friend does in school she's a real artist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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