No reference rendering with pen in Corel Painter. Then colored in Corel Photopaint.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

pretty nice, but dont like the ears/horns, he looks evil

Stomach is too sucked in and hind legs are too developed.... the front legs look like skeletons... not sure what's going on with the tail... and yes, he looks evil... I'd give him eyeballs or reduce the horn effect on the ears....

No reference rendering of pegasus with pen in Corel Painter

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it looks slight malnourished, pegasus is a good mythical creature yet yours looks slightly evil to me :twisted: and tail is to fat in my opinion

Good job, may need a bit of tweaking but good stance and idea though!

omg its totally evil and what the hell is wrong with his front legs they so....whats the word?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i dont know i forgot :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

get rid of the horns they look stupid and pegasus aint evil

 

 

 

apart from all that its good :D

Good job, may need a bit of tweaking but good stance and idea though!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i agree! its good looks like u didnt spend too much time on it, a few tweaks and changes cud make it look nice and none evil tho an evil pegasus is interesting :P

went with the evil pegasus thought :)

haven't u been feading him lol

I am loving your work tttia. Could use some tweaking but is still amazing. 8/10

thanks harry,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and no...not feeding him...he looks lean and mean....just fine for this work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As to refinements...what did ya have in mind?

*cough*background*cough*

that is partly why it is a WIP....Work in Progress....

Yup.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A LOT better than Pegasus on steroids and a starvation diet.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

We can now excuse that all because hes an evil winged horse from hell :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice to see he went to have his tail trimmed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Losing the little wings on the feet also makes it look neater too... Who needs winged feet if you've got 7' wings anyway?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wings need a little texture methinks though. Right now it has a slightly insubstantial feel in the way the wing edges aren't in clear lines, particularly the trailing edge of the wings. They give it a boiling-fog feel with all the shaded hollows and raised areas in the wing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The leading edge of the wing in the foreground also has a folded-over appearance with the heavy dark band, makes the entire wing look a little like a giant ear.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looks much better now though :)

It looks like it is starving :o