Started for somone they never liked so i just continued please rate and give advice

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ya i know i have to change the crowd but i was kinda lazy :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Or the new version

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks,

 

 

 

BoddersDaCat

 

 

 

Ian

I like all the little details. Lets see some CC: Needs more indepth shading, whoa COWS!

the people are to hard to focus on... (dont know if its just me)

whoa COWS!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

indeed...

im having a very hard time distinguishing what items are :?

Yah for some reason my center of focus isnt on the people maybe try making then more noticible

you have improved allot great to see you posted a sig

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

my c/c - needs more depth and the characters have to be the center of attention.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

way to improve the depth, more colors in the shading and make it have a shape.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

way to get it center of attention, less stuff in it & make the characters more notice-able with use of colours.. maybe vivid thats up to you.

you have improved allot great to see you posted a sig

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

my c/c - needs more depth and the characters have to be the center of attention.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

way to improve the depth, more colors in the shading and make it have a shape.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

way to get it center of attention, less stuff in it & make the characters more notice-able with use of colours.. maybe vivid thats up to you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks everyone and moving the guyin the p hat into the middle would that make it better or atleast a little bit?

Whoa cows and yes bumbitey

 

 

 

Im working on putting the guy in the middle and toning down the sign so should be a little better take me couple days maybe finish by friday thanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks

 

 

 

BoddersDaCat

 

 

 

Ian

bumpity

Not much changed but here is my reforming of it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CC and what not

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks

 

 

 

BoddersDaCat

 

 

 

Ian