This is the first chapter of a story that I've been writing at another forum, and just thought that I should post it here for you guys to read. I'll post more chapters if enough people sees it. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Once upon a time, Zamorak, the great lord of evil and destruction unleashed his minions upon the villagers of the world. Many fighters from all over the lands gathered together and attempted to slay the lord of evil himself, but many have failed. After three years of constant siege and warfare between the zamorakians and the SaradominÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ er, peoples; one group of heros finally managed to trap the demon itself within the walls of old Varrock, and with one final blow, Zamorak was defeated and banished to the very inner cores of hell, whereÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ his wife yelled at him for coming home late.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

During the final battle, ZamorakÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s legendary ring, the Apocalypse Circle was shattered into many pieces and scattered all over the lands. The council, who amusingly call themselves Jagex, are now constantly in search of missing ring pieces so that they can control the world.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Many years have passed since the final battle. The world is now a much more peaceful place. The inhabitants have slowly rebuilt their towns, lives, and made pie. Lots and lots of pie. Our story begins in a small castle outpost in the northern lands. Many people would rather avoid the place due to the rumors of being swarmed by.. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅNoobsÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

I actually enjoyed the humour in this one. I wouldn't usually read this type of story but it was a good read and funny too. Keep it up. :D

Thanks for the reply. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Guess I will post the 2nd part then? I'm up to Chapter 14 in another forum, and wouldn't mind starting the story set here too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Part 2

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WeÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ve been walking in the woods for about three days now. Ayumi and I have decided to take the shortest route to Varrock. But for some reason we took the wrong turn about a day ago, so now weÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re basically lost.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅSpirit, are you sure weÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re going the right way?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Hehe, much better than the first, I love the humour in these stories... Hehe... The fish gasping for mouthwash was quite funny. Post the next chapter! Post! Post! Post! :D

Lol, that really is funny. Lol, I guess he went to sleep, the main character is so stupid.... it kinda reminds me of Fry off of Futurama. Keep on posting, I love a good laugh.

Glad to see that you guys are enjoying it. :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is the really [developmentally delayed]ed chapter, lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Part 3

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅHurry up, Spirit, weÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re almost there!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Hehe, as good as ever, hurry up and post more. We need writers like you here. :D

Part 4

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅAyumi, help me!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Lol, that Isaac is one unlucky guy. This is really funny. It looked like a donut, therefore, it must be a donut. Keep writing.

Part 5.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅSpirit, drop it now!!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Good job. I did notice you said Aww, there goes our paintball game twice. Like two paragraphs apart. I like the way the count died, werewolf get em. Shoulda had Spirit throw a pie at him or sumthin, lol. A pie made of rotten apples that KILL ALL WHO DEVOUR IT!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ahem, excuse me..... I don't know what came over me. Keep adding to it, I like this series (Change the title! Still says chapter 3)

Good job. I did notice you said Aww, there goes our paintball game twice. Like two paragraphs apart.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lol, that's part of the joke. I think. :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Part 6

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅAh. What a beautiful morning.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

God. Can't believe I almost forgot about this. Well, that's what I get for running the story in 6 different rs based forums. Hope I'm not violating any double posting rules, but...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Part 7

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅAyumi! Watch out!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

i like that its funny keep it up!

Part 8

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅSpiritÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ Spirit, wake up.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

lol, thats funny :D

keep it going man maybe you should write something about scammers with charcoals and rocks and things like that

yer do scammers!

Thanks for the replies everyone. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Unfortunately, all of these current chapters that I am posting are already pre-written. Which means that I will not be able to change the storyline until after chapter 17 or so, but let's just say that its not the last of the scammer, yet.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Part 9

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author Note: This chapter is in IsaacÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s view. Enjoy! ^_^

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Whoosh! A wooden bolt suddenly shot through the air and impaled a wooden fence, hitting and killing an imp on the other side.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Pant pant*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Whew, IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ve been running for the last twenty minutes now from those guys in the black suits. I think theyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re mad at me for stealing their bronze kite shield, but at least I got out of their house in one piece.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It all started three hours ago while I was following Santa Clause. I was begging for free stuff while bugging me so he took me to the south, no wait, east, west, uhÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ weast! Yeah, thatÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s it, um, the weast side of the town with a whole bunch of ugly fat rocks and people in black robes. They were magicians of some sort and all started shooting fireballs at me. I ran over to one of the and kicked him in the knees and poked him in the stomach with my steel sword and then ran.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Then I remember follow some cloaked stranger through an alleyway, and then sneaking into a hidden house of some sort and taking a bronze kite shield from this one man. He seemed pretty angry, then his entire gang tried to beat me up, but I was too smart for them.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅLook! There he is!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

kool. i like it its good.

wow i want a wooden cart with a ketchup rifle too=)

Part 10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

AuthorÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s note: This chapter is in AyumiÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s narration point, notice the pattern anyone? :thumbsup: (Sorry, had to test the new smiley somewhere.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅSelling adamantine plate mail, only fourteen thousand coins!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

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ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬Åselng bronz plat 4 a r00n weapn!1111ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Part 11

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

AuthorÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s note: Alright, now the narration point is back to Spirit. Hopefully this wonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t confuse people that badly. Enjoy! ^_^

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅDamn it!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Amazing story but where is the rest of it?