alextommo Posted August 27, 2007 Share Posted August 27, 2007 This was my first pixel image I made some time ago, it's pretty simple. Some flaws/improvements I've noticed: Weapon is being wielded in his left hand. (A simple horizontal flip will do the trick.) Character's right arm is thinner than his left. Dragon platelegs could use some more detail. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abelmisi Posted August 27, 2007 Share Posted August 27, 2007 For a first pixel it is amazing. :) Two thumbs up. Some changes can be made however -How does the cape connect to his body? Make it so it looks actually like it is hanging from his neck. -Ears? -Make a handle for the dragonsquare shield. -Dragon armour is not just piece of clothing, make it so it actually looks like he is wearing metal. Nice job nonethless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted August 28, 2007 Share Posted August 28, 2007 For a first pixel it is amazing. :) Two thumbs up. Some changes can be made however -How does the cape connect to his body? Make it so it looks actually like it is hanging from his neck. -Ears? -Make a handle for the dragonsquare shield. -Dragon armour is not just piece of clothing, make it so it actually looks like he is wearing metal. Nice job nonethless. Agreed. I also think you should make his boots slightly smaller, and you might want to clean up your linework on his cape. But overall, good job for a first pixel, you actually shaded things in a pretty good way. :-) pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted August 28, 2007 Share Posted August 28, 2007 Thats very good for a first, the colors are very nice. CC: It would be better if he is holding the shield behind is hand and arm, so the shield covers it. This way you also dont have to worry about the anatomy of the arm. His belly is flat. When I tried to pixel I had the same problem, I dont know how to change that :anxious: The boots could be a bit more rounded His right arm could be a bit thicker, the part above the shield Keep practicing, and post the progress if you are going to improve it :wink: [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shivers21 Posted August 28, 2007 Share Posted August 28, 2007 very nice..... Yet, IT'S FLAT! its looks as if you drew it on paper anad then stood it up. :P And like you said, make the arm fatter... heh heh really good shading. make the cape look like its folded (that's how it is in runescape...right?) and the shield needs a handle. {DeviantART}{Last.Fm}{Join Sublime GFX, great community for artists!}Back to RuneScape, Again.Avatar by Brian The Great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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