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The Jonas Silversmith Trilogy


Redman4933

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Okay, what strikes me most about this story is the fact that it's almost done. I'm not a fan of the story because of how short you wrote the chapters, I've read stories with chapters that are a page long (i.e., holes) but the story had an effect each chapter.

 

 

 

Then, the language thing. Anyone who uses common knowledge can figure out what it means:

 

 

 

̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅEb tsum live, swodahs eht ot dehsinab!̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Hoping to get a new Signature (with matching avatar) soon. :D

 

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Okay, what strikes me most about this story is the fact that it's almost done. I'm not a fan of the story because of how short you wrote the chapters, I've read stories with chapters that are a page long (i.e., holes) but the story had an effect each chapter.

 

 

 

I thought long chapters annoyed people. Guess not!

 

 

 

Then, the language thing. Anyone who uses common knowledge can figure out what it means:

 

 

 

̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅEb tsum live, swodahs eht ot dehsinab!̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

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The easiest solution is to just not have incantations. I HATE incantations (no reason, I just do).

Ah, this reminds me about the noob on the Runescape forums who was upset with the quest "Cold War" because apparently his grandparents died in the war. :wall:
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