September 26, 200718 yr Okay, what strikes me most about this story is the fact that it's almost done. I'm not a fan of the story because of how short you wrote the chapters, I've read stories with chapters that are a page long (i.e., holes) but the story had an effect each chapter. Then, the language thing. Anyone who uses common knowledge can figure out what it means: ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅEb tsum live, swodahs eht ot dehsinab!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Hoping to get a new Signature (with matching avatar) soon. :D In the meantime...Steam username: )I'll rewrite it later (add me if you want)
September 27, 200718 yr Author Okay, what strikes me most about this story is the fact that it's almost done. I'm not a fan of the story because of how short you wrote the chapters, I've read stories with chapters that are a page long (i.e., holes) but the story had an effect each chapter. I thought long chapters annoyed people. Guess not! Then, the language thing. Anyone who uses common knowledge can figure out what it means: ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅEb tsum live, swodahs eht ot dehsinab!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Retired from RuneScape as of November 10th 2007. This is what I am doing now. | My Website | My RuneScape Programs
September 28, 200718 yr The easiest solution is to just not have incantations. I HATE incantations (no reason, I just do). Ah, this reminds me about the noob on the Runescape forums who was upset with the quest "Cold War" because apparently his grandparents died in the war. :wall:
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