Very nice, your descriptions are cool, except there was no description of PT...

 

 

 

This is concurrent to Series 1?

I deliberately left both PT and the time period ambiguous. Rest assured though it directly relates to the overall mythology of the series.

I think it was a flashlight.

 

 

 

 

 

err, flashback :P

"opaque liquid" Wow. I actually had to look that word up. :XD:

 

 

 

Glad to have something to read again.

"opaque liquid" Wow. I actually had to look that word up. :XD:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Seriously? :anxious:

 

 

 

 

 

(sorry if your serious :( )

"opaque liquid" Wow. I actually had to look that word up. :XD:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Seriously? :anxious:

 

 

 

 

 

(sorry if your serious :( )

 

 

 

Belive it or not, I had NEVER seen that word before this chapter!

"opaque liquid" Wow. I actually had to look that word up. :XD:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Seriously? :anxious:

 

 

 

 

 

(sorry if your serious :( )

 

 

 

Belive it or not, I had NEVER seen that word before this chapter!

 

 

 

Weird...(not you)

 

 

 

I use that word all the time. :shock:

 

 

 

I guess I'm just a fat nerd :lol:

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"opaque liquid" Wow. I actually had to look that word up. :XD:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Seriously? :anxious:

 

 

 

 

 

(sorry if your serious :( )

 

 

 

Belive it or not, I had NEVER seen that word before this chapter!

 

 

 

Weird...(not you)

 

 

 

I use that word all the time. :shock:

 

 

 

I guess I'm just a fat nerd :lol:

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:D :lol:

 

 

 

EDIT:

 

*adds something to the conversation other than a couple of smileys*

 

Happy?

 

Anyways, I thought it was you, NOM, who wanted it to beat the other top story in posts...

would you two stop talking about things that are nonsense! Its fine if you were just praising someone, but that last post was just nonsense, please stop! You're ruining my enjoyment!

would you two stop talking about things that are nonsense! Its fine if you were just praising someone, but that last post was just nonsense, please stop! You're ruining my enjoyment!

 

 

 

We're just talking about his story...(in a drawn out way)

 

 

 

and we're bumping the post.

 

 

 

Don't be a poopie head #-o :wall: :P

Bumping the post? It Never gets below the top 15!

What's going on in here :uhh:

 

 

 

This is starting to turn into a blog. At this rate we'll be on page 8 before I get the next part up. . .

 

 

 

I don't mind at all if you hold discussion, but cut down on the random posts a bit. And don't quote the whole pyramid every time.

 

 

 

Cheers.

I hate to point this out Xewleer, but your complaining used up almost as much space as one of my "useless" posts...So stop complaining about it and be happy that someone other than you actually comes to this dark, dreary hole of the forums.

 

 

 

 

 

To say something about the actual story:

 

I wonder who the intruders are? Could this be a flashback as Bloodredsword said a couple of posts back? I think so. It would seem a little funny if there were 2 break-ins on the same day.

It would seem a little funny if there were 2 break-ins on the same day.

 

 

 

Well, it could turn out that there are tons of "parties" trying to get into the "stratagem"

Heh, this is a great series. I love it, it's suspenseful and exciting. Write more! More!

Part II2

 

 

 

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A harsh white light nearly finished blinding Julian as he opened his eyes. He cried out in pain and shut them quickly, letting his eyes adjust to the glare through his eyelids before attempting to see again. When he deemed it safe, he cracked his eyes open. He winced, but it was bearable.

 

 

 

He realized that he was lying on his back on a cool metal surface. Going by the fact that he had woken at all, Julian figured that he was in no immediate danger. He decided against moving just yet and instead tried to organize his thoughts in order to make sense of things.

 

 

 

They had infiltrated the Stratagem, for sure. He remembered that night of crawling through the fields, and getting through the fence. They had been rounding that corner. . .

 

 

 

It was no use. After that, JulianÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s memory was blank. It was obvious that they had been captured, that somehow the security of the Stratagem had been alerted to their presence. Most likely, they were now prisoners.

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅYouÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re awake.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Did a quick fix, there was a bit of a plot hole. . . Julian wasn't supposed to know that only Sylvester was in the cell with them :XD: .

oohhh...SCARY TAZER!

Don't taze me dude!!

 

 

 

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Don't taze me dude!!

 

 

 

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First of all, its bro.

 

 

 

 

 

Second of all, on topic. Was this happening at the same time as the other two's awakening?

Second of all, on topic. Was this happening at the same time as the other two's awakening?

 

 

 

Yes, we have basically rewound back to the general time period of when Ivan, Stephanie, and Kelvin woke up. Although it's not that great of a time difference, a few hours at most.

^k

 

 

 

 

 

Keep writing nom!

Stratagem got pwned? :cry:

Stratagem got pwned? :cry:

 

 

 

I think so.

 

 

 

Our school has exams this week, so hopefully he'll get back to 'em after.

Bahhhhh, lost a few parts. I have them saved though.

 

 

 

And it's on the first page again. Maybe I'll get back to it.