First sprite signature. Another one up!

[ThruItAll]

Studied a sprite signature and came out with this:

 

 

C/c appreciated.

 

Also, Can you get it to 30kb without letting the transparency go, but if you can't I'm not that bothered.

 

Pidgeot:

 

[pandaownage]

I think it's to dark around the edges. Looks good though 7.5/10

[ThruItAll]

Thanks.

 

 

 

And btw; Michael Balzary, wheres my cookie?

[pandaownage]

cookie for you

 

 

 

here ya go

 

 

 

 

^^^big cookie

[sct_snake]

[Soa]

Siggie is too big. By the size of the sprite, you can half the height of it.

 

Good attempt for a first.

[ThruItAll]

Thanks snake. Any comments?

[Unoalexi]

Hmm.. I don't know, that sprite just doesn't mesh well with the other objects in that sig.. You should just use a anime picture of Blazekein instead.

 

 

 

Seven kittens out of ten

[runemetsa]

Looks nice atm, but there are few things to fix:

 

-Cut the effect out, there is too many atm

 

-Make the render more visible

 

-Soften the rounded edges, really pixelated right now

 

-Make a specific light source

 

-Add some gradients to make it bit more 'complete'

 

 

 

Text looks nice and the black fits in really well. Nicely focused.

[ThruItAll]

It was your signature I 'studied'.

 

:P

 

Didn't nail the light I know, but I tried to get the flow.

[runemetsa]

The flow is bit off cause of the red c4d's on it :-k

 

 

 

In the second one the text is bit off placed and the focus is really much overcontrasted and -bright.

[Rainy_Day]

The sides are too boring, but the middle is nice and lively.

 

 

 

All I can suggest is next time don't remove so much of the edges, reveal some of them, even if they are only faint. :)

 

 

 

7/10