Well this is my first try at brushing a render I threw together in C4D, Rate out of 10, need some C&C too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well what I have to say is, I think from what I can see the render is pretty good. But that's where in the problem lies, you over brushed m8. You did to much brushing and over took the render leaving it hard to find.

Ahhh, alright, do you know where a good brushing tut is? I tried pixel2life, but nothing really good.. Hm.. I'll try again..

Its really nice but really dark, try making a tiny bit lighter :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GJ, 8/10

Try not too brush so much over the render, but rather... around it. Mostly just texture the render itself and add a smoky sort of thing around it.