Hey all,

 

 

 

I'd like your oppinions on how I'm doing so far.

 

It's not finished yet :)

 

I prefered the thick lines, i like them more. And don't worry, the black lines will be gone :

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks.

aside from shading, its nice.

 

 

 

i think the outcome will be nice

 

 

 

maybe though, work on the arms, and sleeves, they look funny

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: and the book, it doesnt look like hes holding it, it looks like a ball on top of it. maybe add some fingers gripping it.

its nice, but like what yaff2 said, he's holding the book weird. other what that, nice!

Human anatomy.. completely off..

 

 

 

-The chest is far too long as compared to the head. Generally, the head's length is the length of the chest, and it's width is half the length of the chest.

 

 

 

-The muscles on the arms don't stretch correctly... Hold your arm in the position described in the drawing and you'll see what I mean... since that sword is rather heavy, the muscles should be pulled taunt.. instead of () it's //.

 

 

 

-The sleeve is severing the arm, and it's far too big and billowy.

 

 

 

-Hands are too small

 

 

 

-feet are too small

 

 

 

Other than that, I give it a solid six kittens out of ten.

it's more of a cartoon than a pixel, i'd say

Comics are nice :anxious:

 

 

 

And thanks for the feetback, never been good at anatomy, so I appreciate it :)