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Other than the shading on the head, its very nice

 

 

 

still needs alot of work shading

 

 

 

8/10

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Two minus for pillow shading... <.<

 

 

 

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Nice work though its not very busy, Might just be me but i like sigs/artwork with lots of things going on but anyways, Good shading, Dithering is almost perfect(nothing is perfect 8-) ) Overall, Great work :P

 

 

 

One thing i wouldn't say was too good is that the shading on the head seems a bit too close together, i feel that the shading should be more spread out.

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Nice but 2 things, the black lines, if youd've removed them it'd look cooler, and the shading, make it a wider spot, unless he has a spot light shining at his head from about a foot away then it should be more spread out.

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Thanks to everyone who posted so far. I know theres a few not so good parts but I'm probably not gonna change it cause its a stupid project for school and I don't care much about it.

 

I still enjoy hearing what you all think :D

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Two minus for pillow shading... <.<

 

 

 

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Shading from dark to light without correctly analyzing your light source and knowledge of how light shines on things because of it..

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