coenvg Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 First time I seriously made something with paint :D Please give me your opinions and how I can make progression? First posted version: Newest version: Thank you :wink: Master of Firemaking since 10-11-2007 Yes, I QUIT! =] Master of Woodcutting since Christmas 2007Completed all quests - Completed all achievement diaries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 It looks pretty unique, I like your style. The shading is on the right places, and it still looks cartoony. The axe and the book could use some improvement though, and it looks like the book sticks out of his belly :) Maybe you could make it look like he has the fist-shape when he holds the axe. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainy_Day Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 I agree with Woopidoo2, it is a unqiue style. :) Though the axe, book and boots certainly need changing. And possible the gloves (I can all but assume he has small hands :P). :-w Overall, a good job. :) ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)RIP Michaelangelopolous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coenvg Posted November 1, 2007 Author Share Posted November 1, 2007 OK thanks allot for comments, I'm gonna get some sleep and maybe change the hands tomorrow, I didn't really have an example for the hands, look at the screen shot the fist is under the arm. :XD: Master of Firemaking since 10-11-2007 Yes, I QUIT! =] Master of Woodcutting since Christmas 2007Completed all quests - Completed all achievement diaries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pomar1 Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 Remainds of Zamorak Monk Shop :D Good Work man ----TheLair Game!----"Game isn't dead... You wish!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nom Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 The book definitely needs to be fixed. It looks like it's just floating there in front of his stomach. Chop off the bit that goes past the outline of his torso and it should be good :) . Oh, and the right hand could be beefed up a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gorufriders Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 First time I seriously made something with paint :D not made with paint unless u used paint.net but im thinking more photoshop sig and avy by born2die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pomar1 Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 If you want to compare, here is my ver. (OMG i havent used flash for drawing since half year!), it is in my old Zammy Monk Shop Style: [i havent shaded it so much becouse i have no time ] ----TheLair Game!----"Game isn't dead... You wish!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coenvg Posted November 2, 2007 Author Share Posted November 2, 2007 First time I seriously made something with paint Very Happy not made with paint unless u used paint.net but im thinking more photoshop Ahum... I only used Paint (the regular windows XP version, still the same as windows 95 to me :wink: ) If you want to compare, here is my ver. (OMG i havent used flash for drawing since half year!), it is in my old Zammy Monk Shop Style: [i havent shaded it so much becouse i have no time ] Nice one :thumbsup: , I didn't know I was the only one who loved that outfit. I combined all the stuff myself tough, I also posted this outfit in the great character show on the general discussion forum, hope you didn't the same : Master of Firemaking since 10-11-2007 Yes, I QUIT! =] Master of Woodcutting since Christmas 2007Completed all quests - Completed all achievement diaries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coenvg Posted November 2, 2007 Author Share Posted November 2, 2007 Newer version, the 'hand update' was quite hard to me, and I'm not even sure it looks better now :-k. Version 2: Please post your views on it :P Master of Firemaking since 10-11-2007 Yes, I QUIT! =] Master of Woodcutting since Christmas 2007Completed all quests - Completed all achievement diaries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pomar1 Posted November 2, 2007 Share Posted November 2, 2007 Still Wrong Hand. I dont know what is the name in english, but this 5th finger... should be on other side of handle ----TheLair Game!----"Game isn't dead... You wish!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coenvg Posted November 2, 2007 Author Share Posted November 2, 2007 Ohh, the thumb you mean :D, yea now I get it, thanks, I saw it was wrong, but I didn't see what was so wrong on it. :wink: Edit: Version 3 Master of Firemaking since 10-11-2007 Yes, I QUIT! =] Master of Woodcutting since Christmas 2007Completed all quests - Completed all achievement diaries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted November 2, 2007 Share Posted November 2, 2007 Still Wrong Hand. I dont know what is the name in english, but this 5th finger... should be on other side of handle The pinky finger, I believe. : Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nom Posted November 2, 2007 Share Posted November 2, 2007 Still Wrong Hand. I dont know what is the name in english, but this 5th finger... should be on other side of handle The pinky finger, I believe. : Lol, he definitely meant thumb. Anyway, looks loads better now, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mementh Posted November 4, 2007 Share Posted November 4, 2007 original :) i like the deal.. and the sig you have made :) The following statement is true. The previous statement is false. 60% of all statistics are made up 90% of the time andrew i love you & want you to have my babys!!! Finally, I get to save the Earth with deadly lasers instead of deadly slide shows! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonshadow Posted November 4, 2007 Share Posted November 4, 2007 Honestly, it is very unique, and I really like it. It is a nice cartooney design :D 9 apples out of 10 oranges Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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