It looks finished but i hav some issues with the lighting and the text.looks rather sloppy imo and the render integration is non existant #-o

 

thought id post it up to get some oppinions on it,kinda at a brick wall with this piece.

 

 

 

anyway rate or comment

 

v1-v3

 

Hmm. Its looking very good, but I'd try to do something with the Kris part of the text. Its a bit too bland (heh, I'm one to talk >_<).

 

 

 

Other than that, I think it looks fine. Good work!

imo the assasins creed looks like..idk it stands out to much it draws my eye away from the piece, make it a little more c threw of less solid, i think the word is opacity or somthin? lol idk my spelling sks :P

Hmm. Its looking very good, but I'd try to do something with the Kris part of the text. Its a bit too bland (heh, I'm one to talk >_<).

 

 

 

Other than that, I think it looks fine. Good work!

 

yeah i know but i was rather stuck on where to place my name.

 

im in the midst of a new version so ill post it up soon.

It looks ok, but I think you need to blend the render on the right a little bit more. Also, I agree the text stands out too much.

 

 

 

Not bad overall, looking forward to seeing the newer version.

smudged him in a bit more and changed the colour tones.after some experimenting with differant gradient maps i came up with these.

 

I like very much kris :) Yea maybe meake the text blend in more with the actual pice. Not too much so that it doesnt really stand out. Just make it look in tune with it :