New Mage/Kalphite Pixel Sig? Rate

[Sunwarriord]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rate 1-10

[Auicroa]

it looks very soft and very catroonish. not alot of stuff in the background tho..

[Punkage]

I LIKE:

 

 

 

:: The principial. Cool idea. (Y)

 

 

 

:: The stars, I love how you did them different colored. I learned from looking at this thread. :)

 

 

 

DON'T LIKE:

 

 

 

:: The background is kind of empty, and the fires should be more spread out and all over the place. Not sure why how the kalphites started the fire, but I understand sig makers shouldn't get "blamed" for what the order is like I have before. :roll:

 

 

 

:: How the robe top and bottom just "blend" together like that.

 

 

 

:: The pose of the character.

 

 

 

:: I think it's falador, because I saw a thread about this, but falador doesn't have a moat. Only the castle does, so try including the rest of falador. This would make it look more realistic.

 

 

 

:: The moon should be smaller.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Suggestions:

 

 

 

:: Spend an extra day or a couple of hours looking at it and fix what you, yourself, don't like. You could make it look a lot better like this. There shouldn't be any rush. ;)

 

 

 

:: Try making the wings of the kalphite a new layer with lower opacity. I think you know what I mean. That would look pretty cool.

 

 

 

:: Lower the opacity of the stroke on the "TELE OTHER ON KALPHITE?". Black outlines on a colored outline sig don't ever look good.

 

 

 

:: Ignore any comments by Axeraider or Auicroa.

[axeraider70]

fire is usually a blend of orange and red, not yellow...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i dont like the shading on the castle, just goes from light to dark real quick, giving it a metal effect (which a castle is certainly not made out of metal)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i do like the kalphite, good job.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

perhaps if the guy in the mask was looking at the town it would have been slightly betta...

[WormWizard]

kool idea

[Quer_Skulll]

first of all i like to say that fire is actually a blend of yellow and orange, either that or you can have a blue flame that is a mixture of blue and transparant (sometimes bits of yellow depends on the heat of the flame)

 

 

 

in fire there is a bit of "red" but its more delusional because the darker orange tones are often mistaken for red.

 

 

 

there is however a slight bit of real red around the edges.. but not that much.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

second id like to give c/c

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

shading.. your shading is off.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

atleast you realise a slight bit of lightsource.

 

 

 

the moon aint a terrific light source to pick..

 

 

 

as night falls grass turns teal-blue.

 

 

 

as night falls objects get darker colors (castle)

 

 

 

once again your high-lights are off. (with an exception to the mages right arm.

 

 

 

bad choice of outlines on the horns of the mask.. the horns outlines should be darker and the color should be slight more on the yellow /grey side rather then the black/grey side.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

in the background the fires should be the light source, just put on a camp fire at about midnight. youll see.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

study the basic shapes.. like spheres and stuff.

 

 

 

look at objects in real life to see how different light situations react on different shapes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it helped me ALLOT!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i noted more crucial errors but there are slight more technical errors tho ill save that for another time.