Pixel I've been working on

[yaziyo]

Over the past year or so I've been secretly working on a pixel sig on and off, adding a few things here of there whenever I felt like it. So sitting here stuck with a cold, I thought I may as well put it up and see what people thought, hopefully get a bit of CC. And excuse the big transparent "YAZIYO", I'd just rather some guy didn't take it and put his name in the corner, like I've seen happen before #-o

 

 

 

The earliest version I have:

 

 

 

 

A later version:

 

 

 

 

I've got a few ideas on what to do to it. I thought I'd change the wooden legs of the table to cinderblocks, which would give it a different effect, I was going to put up that Palestinian flag on the wall and then just continue with the texturing and shading. I was also thinking of cheating a little with the ground and making it look more ground like with photoshop, rather than do it manually with paint. What do you think?

 

 

 

 

And it is still very much a work in progress, as you can tell. So any advice or ideas are welcome!

[Jopie211]

You really need to work on the perspective, other than that it's looking fine. I'll do an edit later today to show what I mean (if you don't mind).

[brammy7]

You really need to work on the perspective

 

 

 

yeah this

 

kinda looking like a Salvador Dali painting atm

 

 

 

keep tweaking it tho!

[yaziyo]

Ah I see what you guys mean about the perspective, the door is really small compared to the guy. I've never noticed before. Thanks. :)

[Moonshadow]

I didn't see an image until I switched to an IE tab

 

 

 

I would ditch the black outline on the table, and maybe try the 2:1 ratio.

[Jopie211]

Ah I see what you guys mean about the perspective, the door is really small compared to the guy. I've never noticed before. Thanks. :)

 

 

 

That too, but it's not the main problem. Like I said, I'll do a little edit soon.

[yaziyo]

I would ditch the black outline on the table, and maybe try the 2:1 ratio.

 

Yeah the table is practically unchanged since I first drew it in. By the end, I plan to have nothing with a black outline. That's how I usually do it, I'll draw it with a black outline and then get rid of it when I shade.

 

 

 

And Jopie thanks I would appreciate if you could show me what you mean. :)

[Jopie211]

 

 

 

There you go. There might be some mistakes in my editings, but I believe it's fairly accurate.

 

 

 

The left part with the door is currently the biggest problem. I don't really know how to fix that either, since the perspective there is completely off. :-? Maybe just remove it and focus on the room itself.

 

 

 

Anyway, good luck.

[ThruItAll]

Needs moar penguins...

 

Yes sir, your pespective is royally screwed, doesnt mean you can get it back.