July 21, 200817 yr Author Small curtain-edit; :D | 19,385th to 99 smithing on the 11th of June 2011. || 144,261st to 99 magic on the 2nd of September 2011. || Thanks for sig to DementedHero || Blog |
July 21, 200817 yr Author Small curtain-edit; :D NEW VERSION!!! Reworked the "roundness" on the cake & the plate it's placed on. :D | 19,385th to 99 smithing on the 11th of June 2011. || 144,261st to 99 magic on the 2nd of September 2011. || Thanks for sig to DementedHero || Blog |
July 21, 200817 yr I would start shading the scene a bit more, the cake especially looks very flat. Look up how to dither shade. Even better, look at a real picture of a cake like your picture and mimic how the shadows are. Just keep in mind the candles produce light.
July 21, 200817 yr im no expert but i think the table needs abit more texture and the cake has no shadow :< think where ur light source is coming from
July 21, 200817 yr Much better. Look at how little of the top of the cake you can see, then look at how much of the table you can see. You have your horizontal; perspective correct, but the vertical is still off. Try cutting off 1/3 of the table and see how it looks. 8,325th to 99 Firemaking 3/9/08 | 44,811th to 99 Cooking 7/16/084,968th to 99 Farming 10/9/09 | Runescaper August 2005-March 2010Tip.it Mod Feb. 2008-Sep. 2008 | Tip.it Crew Sep. 2008-Nov. 2009
July 21, 200817 yr Author I would start shading the scene a bit more, the cake especially looks very flat. Look up how to dither shade. Even better, look at a real picture of a cake like your picture and mimic how the shadows are. Just keep in mind the candles produce light. Hmm, ok thanks, I'll try work something out. :) im no expert but i think the table needs abit more texture and the cake has no shadow :< think where ur light source is coming from I'll do my best. : Much better. Look at how little of the top of the cake you can see, then look at how much of the table you can see. You have your horizontal; perspective correct, but the vertical is still off. Try cutting off 1/3 of the table and see how it looks. I think I understand, & I'll definitely try that. :) ~Z | 19,385th to 99 smithing on the 11th of June 2011. || 144,261st to 99 magic on the 2nd of September 2011. || Thanks for sig to DementedHero || Blog |
July 21, 200817 yr Author Things Changed; - The cake is smaller - Text on the cake - Table is not as deep as before (does that look good Nadril? :? ) Things To Change - Shadows & lighting - Perspective (?) - ??? ~Z | 19,385th to 99 smithing on the 11th of June 2011. || 144,261st to 99 magic on the 2nd of September 2011. || Thanks for sig to DementedHero || Blog |
July 21, 200817 yr Author Small tablecloth-edit. :? | 19,385th to 99 smithing on the 11th of June 2011. || 144,261st to 99 magic on the 2nd of September 2011. || Thanks for sig to DementedHero || Blog |
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