If you haven't realised by now I pretty much drum for a band every once in a while,we record songs that we write ourselves,though we can't post any since we're all IP banned from many sites =D...We call ourselves Ezekial Woken,and I've decided,hey I'll post one of the lyrics I wrote...I nearly scewed up the rhyme scheme,so take it easy,I know.

 

 

 

We write our songs,no doubt in differing styles,but we follow a certain story plot,may tell you the story soon,but not now.My song is the first in the order,its The Calling...We've not decided on that,so it can be something else with a similar meaning.By the way when I was writing this...and we were naming our band,we found that there is a passage somewhere (The Bible?) regarding Satan by Ezekiel,we were like "hey,nice name" so we took it.But I'm not Satanic,so don't be hating,yo.

 

 

 

A song bird sings to the light of day

 

Mephisto sucks up to God...

 

Blast (!) the whole world and send them to dusk

 

The fact they're alive is odd...

 

 

 

As the Saints preach bloody preachings

 

And Lucifer scoffs in their face,

 

We kill the ignorant,rent their souls,

 

They're useless alive in this case!

 

 

 

-Chorus?-

 

The stallions call for better riders,

 

And swords for better fighters.

 

In a peaceful place like Eden,

 

Where can we find such Children?

 

 

 

You have gone too far

 

With all these peaceful things

 

Life's not easy,why is death?

 

Why should bodies simply fall when their souls have (F-ING) left?

 

-/Chorus?-

 

 

 

I always thought he was bad~

 

We were always taught to ha~ate him!

 

 

 

-Guitar Solo-

 

 

 

The Bringer of Light,

 

Cast to Darkness,cast from Eden

 

The questioning was wrong,I always thought,

 

My ignorance is blinding,if not now then when?

 

 

 

The Seal beckons,why not?

 

I shall leave this cursed garden to rot.

 

Mine own brothers have left me to the Dark

 

What evidence is left of the home for which I once fought?

 

 

 

-Chorus?-

 

The stallions call for better riders,

 

And swords for better fighters.

 

In a peaceful place like Eden,

 

Where can we find such Children?

 

 

 

You have gone too far

 

With all these peaceful deaths

 

Life's not easy,why is death?

 

Why should bodies simply fall when their souls have left?

 

-/Chorus?-X2

 

 

 

-Ezekial has left the building!-

 

 

 

Oh or-or...AW!(Just basic build-up then scream,to be honest...)

 

 

 

There we go,I'll leave the music section blank,and if anyone actually sings it I'll love to hear it,our version isn't that great yet...I just like to say that its in the Metal genre,do a rap and I shall kill you dead.Double negative isn't self-cancelling,I want you doubly dead.

SCREAMING!!!!!!

 

 

 

Why does everybody have to scream at the end of metal songs?

 

 

 

Anyway good song I would listen to it. :

SCREAMING!!!!!!

 

 

 

Why does everybody have to scream at the end of metal songs?

 

 

 

Anyway good song I would listen to it. :

 

 

 

Because if they're a good band the and the audience screams a long they lose any anger against the world they've built up.Thats what Ricky said,anyway.He sings :roll:

lol sounds like a decent reason. i never thought of that. \

Lol Hawk

Lol Hawk

 

Wha'bout the song? #-o

Lol Hawk

 

Wha'bout the song? #-o

 

 

 

Though I'd have to hear it sung, it reads pretty good. Any chance you could record for us and post somehow?

Lol Hawk

 

Wha'bout the song? #-o

 

 

 

Though I'd have to hear it sung, it reads pretty good. Any chance you could record for us and post somehow?

 

 

 

Not to my knowledge.We're all IP banned,as I've said.Something about uploading "horny" sounds,I dunno I've never done that...

 

 

 

I'm editing a new song,but I'll edit this post in a bit with the next song in the series.Actually,I've written all the songs we have so far,they suck at English and Ricky isn't too creative...

 

 

 

~Editing!~This is I believe "Outcast" and Ezekial speaks of his journey to the underworld.As compared to the Death Metal style "my song" was written in mind of,this is for the guitarist,and its more of a power ballad.(Search Poet and the Pendulum by NightWish,13 mintues of gold)(I actually tried to make it more power metal-ish,I dunno how it would've turned out,because as a ballot,epic fail)

 

 

 

(Voice intro,no music at all...Well drum fill =P)

 

 

 

The day is cold,

 

And so is night,

 

The steps I take are bold.

 

I am ready for any fight! (echoes)

 

 

 

(Riff intro)

 

 

 

Falling from heaven,now that wasn't hard,

 

Wings of feathers were always weak wings of scales are strong

 

My rhymes have been thrown aside,it doesn't matter since I'm no ba~ard...

 

I have waited for so long! (echoes)

 

 

 

-Chorus-

 

Step into the fires of hell! (hell!)

 

Jump into Jotunheim's well! (well!)

 

Sail down the river Styx! (Styx!)

 

Against me body let the flames lick! (echoes)

 

-/Chorus-

 

 

 

I passed a few towns on the way to the gate,

 

Causing mischief as I go.

 

More than a few dinners silently I ate,

 

On each day their spirits were low...

 

 

 

-Chorus-

 

Step into the fires of hell! (hell!)

 

Jump into Jotunheim's well! (well!)

 

Sail down the river Styx! (Styx!)

 

Against me body let the flames lick! (echoes)

 

-/Chorus-

 

 

 

It took me days to arrive! (Ive!)

 

But I'm not surprised to be alive! (Ive!)

 

Swords were drawn at first, (Irst!)

 

But they were sheathed because for power they THIRST!

 

 

 

-Chorus-

 

Step into the fires of hell! (hell!)

 

Jump into Jotunheim's well! (well!)

 

Sail down the river Styx! (Styx!)

 

Against me body let the flames lick! (echoes)

 

-/Chorus-X2

 

 

 

I begin my entry!

 

I bow to the sentry!

 

 

 

He opens the gate!

 

I open my eyes to my fate!

 

 

 

(instruments die away to be replaced by a more sad sounding tune)

 

 

 

So this is where my jour-ney ends?

 

No forest leaves,no beach sands?

 

 

 

It doesn't matter anyway...

 

I'm here in Hell and I'm here to STAY

 

 

 

(Instruments return upon "stay" and it becomes instrumental till the end.

I like this one too. :)

I realise that in everysong for this story setting the chorus is sung twice towards the end...

Oooh... Creepy... :ohnoes:

I didn't really like the 6th line, that was a little bit harder ti read, and I'm thinking now how the music goes to it. Otherwise I like it.

I didn't really like the 6th line, that was a little bit harder ti read, and I'm thinking now how the music goes to it. Otherwise I like it.

 

 

 

Meh,power ballads are usually slow for the first two verses,like in this case.There was very little in terms of speed,so if you heard it,Hawks may not like it...I'm thinking whether to post the next song in the series or to post the guy's story...

What about both :D

What about both :D

 

Screw you =P

 

 

 

The Story,minus speech,minus detail.So just the plot.:

 

 

 

Ezekial was once an angel,much like Lucifer,much like Mephisto.He was just a child,but he knew the preachings of Lucifer before he was sent to Hell,and they stuck with him.Years later he grew up with Mephisto,who had begun to suck up to God.When God decreed angels had to bow to humans as well as God,he denied,and was sent down.As such,Ezekial was in heaven without a friend,and hating the system of heaven.

 

 

 

Soon,he finds a seal of Lucifer,and it speaks to him.Feeling a great connection between him and the Fallen Angel,he leaves Eden in the dead of night for the gates of Hell,causing havoc as he goes.When he enters the gate he realises that his training in combat as he grew up was superior to that the fallen angels had received when they did,and he was made a Lord.His power grew,as did his influence.

 

 

 

When God let Jesus onto Earth to purge the human sins,many demons lost their power.Ezekial didn't,but he was put into a deep slumber,guarded by his own men.Now known as the Slumbering Lord,he was prophesised (SP help plox?) to rise upon the Apocalypse,symbolising its beginning.

 

 

 

Now,1900 years later,Ezekial is woken,but he is powerless,he is a human,and the Apocalpyse is yet to begin.Worse still,his real body lies miles below in Hell,virtually unprotected from real DemonLords...

 

 

 

-There,besides,I can't think of a real story,with dialouge and crap.Alright then,I might write a full story,but currently this is all I have.

What about both :D

 

Screw you =P

 

 

 

Mr. Moderator, if we still have one, he's cursing at me!

 

lol jking :lol:

Ezekial was once an angel,much like Lucifer,much like Mephisto.He was just a child,but he knew the preachings of Lucifer before he was sent to Hell,and they stuck with him.Years later he grew up with Mephisto,who had begun to suck up to God.When God decreed angels had to bow to humans as well as God,he denied,and was sent down.As such,Ezekial was in heaven without a friend,and hating the system of heaven.

 

 

 

Soon,he finds a seal of Lucifer,and it speaks to him.Feeling a great connection between him and the Fallen Angel,he leaves Eden in the dead of night for the gates of Hell,causing havoc as he goes.When he enters the gate he realises that his training in combat as he grew up was superior to that the fallen angels had received when they did,and he was made a Lord.His power grew,as did his influence.

 

 

 

When God let Jesus onto Earth to purge the human sins,many demons lost their power.Ezekial didn't,but he was put into a deep slumber,guarded by his own men.Now known as the Slumbering Lord,he was prophesised (SP help plox?) to rise upon the Apocalypse,symbolising its beginning.

 

 

 

Now,900 years later,Ezekial is woken,but he is powerless,he is a human,and the Apocalpyse is yet to begin.Worse still,his real body lies miles below in Hell,virtually unprotected from real DemonLords...

 

 

 

-There,besides,I can't think of a real story,with dialouge and crap.Alright then,I might write a full story,but currently this is all I have.

 

Corrected my mistake...Its only 900 years heh.Erm,okay continuing...

 

 

 

Adopting a Jewish name Ezekial Isabod Rabin,he participated in the Crusades defending Jerusalem in hopes of returning either to heaven or hell.After a few years of this,he realises he still maintains his immortality,though none of his other manipulative powers have remained.(Basically,he keeps Cons and Str heh...)

 

 

 

And after that he basically travels the ages...Should we have a next album,he's going to be in the American Wars (Colonisation-Civil),so he's spent over 500-700 years without his real body,not knowing if he would be safe anyway.