Insane212 Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 right i wna make a signature for my clan website i alredy using the "working together" one but ima bit bored of it :P so heres my next one its just a rough outline (im adding more than bandos but) i know i need to retouch the lines im doing it now (ive alredy done some parts) anything that doesnt look right? (im thinking the right hand) C/C!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 I think hes a bit wide, even for a troll. The shoulder pad just sits on his should and doesn't protect it really. Arms are a bit short. The right hand looks good, maybe you should paint out the fingers a bit better until you decide to put some colour in it. ^What I found weird. Original concept (I think) and it looks quite good already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Insane212 Posted July 25, 2008 Author Share Posted July 25, 2008 arms look better like this? (quick re-drawn) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 The way the arms are pointed are perfect in my opinion, try making them longer while having them in the same position, his arms looks a bit "jerky" at the moment (On the "quick re-drawn"). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Insane212 Posted July 25, 2008 Author Share Posted July 25, 2008 well for the arm length they arnt fully in the picture, cus the sig isnt wide enuff :P so that porblem is fixed, can anyuone find me a picture of the bandos chestplate symbol? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 The shoulder pad should be a bit lower down than it is at the moment, cheers. Credits to Chazimcgee for finding image source Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 Can't really say a lot about it yet, but it's looking pretty good so far. I agree with Julius about his wideness though, I wouldn't really know what he looks like in-game, but I think he could do with being slimmed down a little. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chazimcgee Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 2nd one is much better :) Good luck with shading Here is what graardor looks like in game :) HEheh julius :P Fatty :twss: Sn'C Events Team Member942nd to 99 hunter 2/8/07|26,042nd to reach 99 fletching 27/10/07|Quest Cape Achieved 22/1/08|50,000th to 99 Cooking 29/10/08Dagannoth King Drops: 7 Zerkers 2 Axes 3 Warriors | Armadyl: 1 hilt first ever trip and kill | Barrows: 2 Dharok Legs 1 Ahrim Skirt 1 Torag Helm 1 Guthan Spear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted July 26, 2008 Share Posted July 26, 2008 Thanks chaz. For one, the shoulder pads alignment is out of whack. See how it hangs on the troll dude (graador?) and try to mimic it. So far you have really good linework but my other query is the face. It looks real mashed up, even for a troll, and the teeth seem a bit...ehh... One thing though, what are you doing for your background? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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