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My first animation, please help me improve


Aeriath

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This is my first animation (I know he's a stick man) and I want to do more. Can you reccomend what I should change (I will do better drawing soon).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for any posts, here's the image:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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erm, what do expect people to say? I don't think its that good, even if it's a first.. 1/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'd say make the head smaller and put him in a possible position, that one looks painful.. Draw a more lifelike character, if you still want it as a stickman add more detail like a face expresson or something. with such little animation you can afford to improve the graphics, he's only blinking.. the fire looks ok though, add more fire detail and a bg..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

more action animations are liked more cus it looks more impressive, much more frames..

 

 

 

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Thanks for the reply. I'll keep all that stuff in mind for the next time, I just wanted to do an animation first to get myself familiar with the package. I put it together very quickly, but next time I will take my time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks again for the comments.

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Try making a few free animated sigs, 300x150 size.. Just post on the Media Market asking for any requests, if you post that animation you'll surely get half a dozen people replying..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here's simple idea, just a quick animation about a mage casting magic on someone..

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