This is my first animation (I know he's a stick man) and I want to do more. Can you reccomend what I should change (I will do better drawing soon).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for any posts, here's the image:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

erm, what do expect people to say? I don't think its that good, even if it's a first.. 1/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'd say make the head smaller and put him in a possible position, that one looks painful.. Draw a more lifelike character, if you still want it as a stickman add more detail like a face expresson or something. with such little animation you can afford to improve the graphics, he's only blinking.. the fire looks ok though, add more fire detail and a bg..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

more action animations are liked more cus it looks more impressive, much more frames..

 

 

 

Thanks for the reply. I'll keep all that stuff in mind for the next time, I just wanted to do an animation first to get myself familiar with the package. I put it together very quickly, but next time I will take my time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks again for the comments.

Nice animation that one you made terley :)

Nice animation that one you made terley :)

 

 

 

I do agree with him, and taht was your first animation?

 

 

 

Aeriath, keep improving, one day you will reach perfection 8)

Well, thanks for the comments. Based on what you said, I improved the graphics and extended the clip:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hehe nice 1... how many frames and layes u use up?

Thanks Netox. I used 46 frames, and I didn;t use layers as it was done on paint. I haven;t quite goten round to figuring out many things on photoshop atm.

What do you use to put your animations together, i used to use the gimp but now my drive has been wiped and haven't gotten it back yet, as well as internet anyway.

It's only GIF Animator, but it;s fun all the same.

Much better, next time try make an animated sig?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

new one 6/10 for animation

Thanks for the rating. Next time I will do it smaller, I didn;t realise I couldn;t resize it once I'd done. I just need a new idea then I'll make one.

Try making a few free animated sigs, 300x150 size.. Just post on the Media Market asking for any requests, if you post that animation you'll surely get half a dozen people replying..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here's simple idea, just a quick animation about a mage casting magic on someone..

OK, I'll give that a go.

and i thought it was with Flash MX :D