tis not very good but definately better... I am still not sure what else to add to it though. CC please advice also. Thanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Mrs C

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I changed it some but not much

well I dont know much to say about it because its reslly just practice... it kind of looks like a whip is her tail or something but ya. The white outlining makes it hard to see. Shes kind of like gumbi lol cause she really doesnt have much bone work. Her chest is a little messed up. Is she wearing shoes? Dont try to do each strand of hair because it ends up looking a bit messed up. Anyways this is just practice for you so its not that bad.

 

 

 

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\___/ this is a cool face!

Its a whip, she is holding it (look closely at her hand)...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I didn't try each strand of hair but tried to add highlightes (guess I won't next time).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The drawing of humans is what I am working on most (considering my first try)...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

her shoes are sandles see the brown?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

umm its a really really light blue outline, but you are right I should have done another color.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thank you very much for the comments I really appreciate them.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what about the rest of the picture?

It looks cool. I like the white outlining on the girl - It suits her. Or so I think, anyway.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's looking good. With some more shading, it'll be pretty cool. ;P I saw that they were sandals. ;P

Thank you :-) and bonus points for noticing the sandals lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Shading on what? the girl of course, but I have never done much shading before now, in fact none really.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the castle was easy to do though, I went from graphicsgale (where I drew it) to fireworks and added the darker gray to the bricks then I just used the blur tool on it I think it turned out best...

Yeah the light outline on the person is too bright, try just using black or a dark shade of the blue you used for the outfits. Add some shadow under ground under her feet to show she's standing on the ground and not floating. The lighting on the green ground should be slightly opposite since the moon is at the far side, so the lightest grounds should be at the farside too, getting darker as the ground approaches the person and the building. A nice addition would be a simple border, a few pixels wide (preferably non-light color) to enclose the pic. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Character looks still need work but it comes in practice through time. Just try to add a few shades, focusing on each part of the body separately as to not get overwhelmed with shading the entire body at once.

Again thank you so much for the advice I really really appreciate it :-)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thank you for the comments and I will work on it and let you know when I have updated it enough to show again :-)

You're welcome. :wink:

RUBBERBANDMAN

 

 

 

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RUBBERBANDMAN

 

 

 

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heh thanks..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I updated it a bit not much but changed the outline of her clothes and added a border and yeah...

I love the sky. It's getting pretty awesome, dude.