ok well im very very inexperienced at pixeling, ive just started trying after getting bored of making abstract sigs. so i was looknig for some C/C on this linework below i followed one of quer skulls tutorials in a roundabout way, so thanks quer skull.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

so constructivly criticize away :S

it looks choppy to me, im guessing lines thick on purpose...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BTW I cant draw living thing's for shnit...

it looks choppy to me, im guessing lines thick on purpose...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BTW I cant draw living thing's for shnit...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lo i agree it looks choppy but cant work out how to make it not if you see what i mean im already using a 1 pixel pencil tool on photoshop. :S

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but thanks im gonna try and figure how to make it look less choppy.

To get rid of the choppiness, make the pixel legs and body etc. one pixel instead of a bunch of pixels, like you have. All you need to do is take white and the 1Px pencil and get rid of some of those pixels (the ones creating lines on the body).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It looks pretty decent so far, for one of your first tries.

To get rid of the choppiness, make the pixel legs and body etc. one pixel instead of a bunch of pixels, like you have. All you need to do is take white and the 1Px pencil and get rid of some of those pixels (the ones creating lines on the body).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It looks pretty decent so far, for one of your first tries.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thankyou im pleased it looks good for my first try :)

To get rid of the choppiness, make the pixel legs and body etc. one pixel instead of a bunch of pixels, like you have. All you need to do is take white and the 1Px pencil and get rid of some of those pixels (the ones creating lines on the body).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It looks pretty decent so far, for one of your first tries.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ive tried to remove the choppiness and this is what ive got how does it look.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it looks like an old man...

Okay. Now just do it to the other body and his shoe on our left.

it looks like an old man...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

helpfull :roll:

The arm holding the shield is disproportional from his whole body. Actually, the whole body needs some proportion work, try making the legs a bit closer, and the arms a bit wider, fore arms arent sticks, the are wide from the elbow and get thinner to the wrist. The torso also needs a bit work, its more rectangular than trapizoid shaped like most male bodies. the broad shoulders are the good point in the picture, but overall try harder. Keep it up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

here you go i made some changes to it for you.

 

 

 

basicly the pectorials (the chest) are supossed to be on the same body line as the back-bone since well your body angle was a bit to our left however everything seems drawn full frontal.

 

 

 

i made a waist line because well waist is uber-sexy :P nah well a waist line will never hurt the drawing.

 

 

 

i changed the legs to look more like armor plating and well there supossed to have some muscle build in them, legs are not rectangulars.

 

 

 

the abdomnials were placed incorrectly on the body.

 

 

 

i well.. messed up the feet sorry, i made a mistake in the size and perspective :cry:

 

 

 

The sword was good.

 

 

 

changed the head to a more human shape.

 

 

 

changed the arms to a sort of like cartoony look yet atanomicly correct in another way, try to follow its example.

 

 

 

the should stuck out to much.

 

 

 

left shoulder should be a bit BEHIND the body.

Quer Skulll....He has fat cheeks and no crotch. :shock: .. :? ... :) ..:D ...:lol:

ssh- the thing in armor is still a kid :wink: :lol:

I guess so! :o

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

here you go i made some changes to it for you.

 

 

 

basicly the pectorials (the chest) are supossed to be on the same body line as the back-bone since well your body angle was a bit to our left however everything seems drawn full frontal.

 

 

 

i made a waist line because well waist is uber-sexy :P nah well a waist line will never hurt the drawing.

 

 

 

i changed the legs to look more like armor plating and well there supossed to have some muscle build in them, legs are not rectangulars.

 

 

 

the abdomnials were placed incorrectly on the body.

 

 

 

i well.. messed up the feet sorry, i made a mistake in the size and perspective :cry:

 

 

 

The sword was good.

 

 

 

changed the head to a more human shape.

 

 

 

changed the arms to a sort of like cartoony look yet atanomicly correct in another way, try to follow its example.

 

 

 

the should stuck out to much.

 

 

 

left shoulder should be a bit BEHIND the body.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thankyou very very much and thanks to everyone else whos posted ill do a bit more practice and hopefully get better, thankyou. :)

phew ive worked on his upped body and head for a bit looking at quer_skulls guy to help me a bit with proportian and this is what i have now i think it is definatly a good improvement, now to do the legs.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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