September 4, 200817 yr Me and Jason decided to do a wallpaper collab. here was our result. [hide=1280x800][/hide] We made a 1280x1024, but can't find the link, so I'll wait until jason posts it :P I call it C4DSplatter. We wanted to do a mix of stles as you can see 8-) Yay? or Neh? 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
September 4, 200817 yr It looks ok, but it needs more depth. Also, I don't like that part where the c4d just stops, and it creates and straight line. I assume that's where the c4d ends.
September 4, 200817 yr It feels like a load of stuff on top of eachother. There are some c4ds, some splatter brushes on top and in the back, some wireframes over it, theres no interaction. The huge splatters in the center of the c4d-mess look really really off, in terms of colour, placement, shape, everything. Why is there a random tin of paint on the left? Again no interaction with the rest of the piece. Why does the c4d's stop all of the sudden? The yellow text in a bad font, with a fat black border. Why? I'm sorry, but I just really don't like this. What you could do is go for a general coloursceme, cause right now, the c4ds have a coloursceme, the splatters have another coloursceme. That doesn't work. Get rid of the double-stuff at the text, the dripping stuff on top, it completely ruins the dripping effect. Get some logic in there. Don't make it just random stuff, give it a reason to be the way it is. Have it dripping from a tin of paint? Have a tin of paint explode perhaps?
September 4, 200817 yr I have to agree with DH here. It just doesn't work for me, looks like two or three different pieces of art put together. Most parts have potential IMO, but together they're confusing and distracting. Sorry. :( pixel avvy by me deviantART
September 4, 200817 yr I too agree with DH. I was wondering about the c4d ending :? and was confuse. The colourscheme isn't great, try a limited palette next time, so things don't get wtfpwnt.
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